Long View

There's a part of me in Longview.

~ Long View ~

 

It’s a long view from the seclusion of a solitary soul

One that holds out the seeker of her treasured enigmas

And yet she waits…

For the one whom is willing to go to the depths of her life

Holding his breath until the final jewel is pulled from the extremity of her soul

Guarding each single-one with an iron-clad locket of true uniqueness

Never willing to reveal the painstaking secrets it took to solve the mystery

 ~

It’s a long view from where I stand

I can only see so far with these eyes I was given, but I still stare in your direction

And yet I wait…

For the day when your heart says it’s okay for me to try and open it

And sometimes I can feel it tugging at me in its confusion

Not sure if I’m the one who should safe guard it but not sure if he is the one either

But what it doesn’t know is what depths I’m willing to go

And how long I’m willing to hold my breath from now…until?

I can see you slowly turning your eyes in my direction each passing day

So…

Lock onto me and let’s take a journey to the corners of our universes

As I explore you and you explore me

And we’ll take the long view around.

~

Long View

Reviews

[FancyMee]

The words of this, speak so romantically. Amazing

[FancyMee]

Your writing is really, really amazing

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Fancy :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Oh the Romantic Poet. I'm about to swoon :)

"For the day when your heart says its okay for me to try and open it."

"But what it doesn't know is what depths I'm willing to go."

You're killing me with these lines!

[Chris Micha]

OH look at you trying to be all sweet! :)

There may or may not be a hopeless romantic erotic writer in here somewhere deep.

Thank you my friend! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I'm always sweet. i just like teasing you cause its so fun ;)

Well start digging deep and let him come out already!
You're welcome buddy :)

[MsJewel]

I love the soft, sensual feel of your words. There is longing here and there is romance. What woman wouldn't be seduced by such beautiful words...
:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Well I need to find one that is, lol. Thank you for your wonderful review sweet friend. :)

[MsJewel]

My pleasure

[John Ryan]

great work on this piece Christian

nice quaint read

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, John :)

[Dancing_Elixir]

And we'll take the long view around.. I love plays on words. Great piece Doll.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you love :)

[Daydreamer]

GORGEOUS! Extravagant writing....
I enjoyed so much

[Chris Micha]

Thank you :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Very interesting write indeed!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you :)

[kublakhan27]

A truly seductive piece, as seductive as the one for which you wait...every single line is a gem here...the "holding his breath" line has the same effect on me...awesome work :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you :)