Christian, yearning and romantic loneliness rises from each stanza like the vapor from hot, bare pavement on a hot summer day. So beautiful and wistful. Great write, my friend...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
This one really says a lot from me. So I really appreciate you saying that! :)
This oozes a romantic longing that can only be felt by a heart that has been touched! In all honesty, I could hear a melody when I read this, especially in those final verses. For someone who is not a musician, you have a way of penning some lyrics that strike a chord!
Beautiful and heartfelt write. Hopefully your nights won't be lonely much longer. :)
Awww, this really was so sweet and romantic. We all miss our loved one when they are far away, and we yearn for them in the loneliness of the night when we are all alone. A nice, beautiful poem with honest emotion in it.
To sum me up is pretty easy. I love writing because it's therapy for my wayward soul. Although, I am by no means any good at it, I still put myself out there. I use to write when I was younger but gav.. more..