Par-a-dox

Thought experiment.

 

Par-a-dox

: something (such as a situation)

that is made up of two opposite things and that seems impossible

but is actually true or possible.

 

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He said "Why are you always on my mind?"

Her response "Because I need somewhere to sleep."

 

She said "Why are you always on my mind?"

His response "Because I need a reason to exist."

 

~

 

There are two versions of my life.

That exists on two parallels.

Both equally lucid.

Both seemingly impossible.

Because something so amazing,

shouldn't exist.

 

One version -

You dance in my mind daily.

 

The other -

You dance on my perceived reality,

through spatial distance.

 

 

The Paradox:

 

Am I thinking you into existence?

 

or

 

Are you thinking me into existence?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[michele vera]

Hi Christian, I Loved This Poem very Much so. My Favorite Line was,"Both Seeemingly Impossibe because Something So Amazing Shouldn't Exist." When Something is So Wonderful,it Truly does Feel Impossible, I Totally Agree with You! Brilliant Concepts, and Amazing Poem!

[Chris Micha]

Michele, I am wonderfully delighted and honored that you have such grand words to say. I am beyond honored that you follow my word. :)

[michele vera]

I have to say a lot of your Writings I am able to Truly Relate To. Your Words are compacted with so much Heart-Felt Emotion. Your Writings always Strike a chord for me. I Think You are Truly Very Gifted!

[MagicAl]

Love this!!.. love philosophical debates, and this is one which has been written very creatively. Interesting topic, and leaves the reader thinking.. really good work :)

[Chris Micha]

I am so pleased to hear you say that, Magic! I truly means a lot...thank you. :)

[MagicAl]

You're welcome.. :)

[Lisa Bland]

Good poem. I thought it was a very diffrent approach to poetry.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Lisa! :)

[s y e]

I read this over and over and over and over again and then read it to my whole family. This makes a powerful punch Batman. I really loved how you wrote this, it is very thought provoking - makes me use my brain but I forgive you - and the wording was perfect.

Fandango!

[Chris Micha]

Hey you've got to use that organ between your ears for something my dear! lol

You're so sweet and the perfect sidekick! Now let's go kick some a*s :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was beautiful ! Loved it! Xo Winter

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you so much, Winter! I am honored, ma'am!

[Madalyn Beck]

Another great write by you!! This is a really thought provoking piece and you have penned it wonderfully. I really enjoyed this one. In fact, I think I've read it about 5x now if that tells you how much I enjoy it! (:

[Chris Micha]

5x whew....it blew my mind just writing it lol. Thanks again Mads, I can always count on you! :)

[Dancing_Elixir]

I didn't think you could write a poem that I would like more than Key to the Universe... But this one ties for first at a minimum. Love the thought provoking way you have composed this piece, the reader can't help but want to read it again. 💗lucid

[Chris Micha]

Thanks doll it really means a lot coming from you. I hope you've had a great weekend. :)

[willweb]

This poem created so much thought in me today. Who are we really if we don't exsist in another's mind? I enjoyed reading this today. Very good Christian

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Will. Exactly, if we don't exist in other's minds "who are we". :)

[Purbleazaleya]

This was wonderfully written. Very thought evoking and ignites the curiosity of the reader. It's one of those poems that actually makes us sit and reflect on certain things in our lives.

[Chris Micha]

Awesome, I'm so glad it evoked that response in you. I love to question things, so I generally write about those things.

Thank you! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Makes a person think that it does.This is another excellent pen by you Mr Grey lol

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear friend for your wonderful review! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Chris :)

[michele vera]

Hi Cristian,I just read this Poem, once again Brilliant as always! I truly Loved it!Your writing covers so many Themes I can relate to. I love your work!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my dear. I truly means a lot! :)

[michele vera]

Yuu are so very welome Christian. You are so Talented! I look forward to reading more of your work.