Par-a-dox

Thought experiment.

 

Par-a-dox

: something (such as a situation)

that is made up of two opposite things and that seems impossible

but is actually true or possible.

 

~

 

He said "Why are you always on my mind?"

Her response "Because I need somewhere to sleep."

 

She said "Why are you always on my mind?"

His response "Because I need a reason to exist."

 

~

 

There are two versions of my life.

That exists on two parallels.

Both equally lucid.

Both seemingly impossible.

Because something so amazing,

shouldn't exist.

 

One version -

You dance in my mind daily.

 

The other -

You dance on my perceived reality,

through spatial distance.

 

 

The Paradox:

 

Am I thinking you into existence?

 

or

 

Are you thinking me into existence?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[michele vera]

Hi Christian, I Loved This Poem very Much so. My Favorite Line was,"Both Seeemingly Impossibe because Something So Amazing Shouldn't Exist." When Something is So Wonderful,it Truly does Feel Impossible, I Totally Agree with You! Brilliant Concepts, and Amazing Poem!

[Chris Micha]

Michele, I am wonderfully delighted and honored that you have such grand words to say. I am beyond honored that you follow my word. :)

[michele vera]

I have to say a lot of your Writings I am able to Truly Relate To. Your Words are compacted with so much Heart-Felt Emotion. Your Writings always Strike a chord for me. I Think You are Truly Very Gifted!

[CL Ngwe-Nwi]

hmmmmm. very interesting. I love it.

[Luna Zerimar]

Paradox. Hm, interesting.

I liked this. It's very cool.

You did good on this!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Jessica :)

[Luna Zerimar]

You're welcome. (:

[Daydreamer]

Oh my God! This is such a wonderful piece of poetry!!!!!!
I love the concept so much and how you set up everything,Chris!
Very talented,God bless :)
A 100/100!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my friend. I'm honored! :)

[Daydreamer]

Very welcome

[Blue]

Aren't you a genius? :) This piece is profoundly mind-blowing. Love it.

[Chris Micha]

Arzel, thank you so very much for the kind words. You are amazing! :)

[Matching Socks]

This is the first of yours I'm reading.
Really like your style and thoughts and feelings it brings out.
Can't wait to read more.

[Chris Micha]

Wow....thank you so much, Ance. I am so honored! :)

[Maria12]

I like this...I can imagine writing it.Paradox is intriguing.I can't add how it can be improved as it seems very good already.The form suits the content well.I feel it shows mastery of the art and yet is light in a way and also deep which in itself is a paradox.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Mary. I really appreciate your words! :)

[Maria12]

I look forward to reading more of your poems

[FireFox9]

Hmmm. Scientific kind of view point mixed with thoughts and feelings. Well done it's very enjoyable to read. Fox-

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much kind, sir. Always an honor to have you review my work! :)

[MissPrincessC]

Leaving a mystery or question on one's mind never fails. This one is great. Definitely, 5 stars.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Miss Princess. I am truly honored, ma'am! :)

[Mirra]

Ok so I've read some of your poems and they are really my favorites. AGAIN! This one's awe-mazing! Haha I like how you choose your subject like the inspiration to write is always in front of you waiting to be penned down. And what's more amazing is how you write them, you have a unique style of writing which makes the readers crave for more and don't blink until they have read the last words. I can never say more this poem is just excellent!!

[Chris Micha]

Wow Ink! I am so honored and humbled to hear such words. I can't tell what that means to me. Thank you for such an amazing review! :)

[Mirra]

You are most welcome ^_^