I adored this one. It is filled with love, passion and romance. Your imagery is vivid and oh so beautiful and the wording just puts me on cloud 9, this truly magnificent. Any girls dream to have his read to her by the one she loves. You are an awesome romantic poet my dear, sweet friend!!
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Hola Batgirl, as I am one of your biggest fans as well.
If the women is someone he trul.. read moreHola Batgirl, as I am one of your biggest fans as well.
If the women is someone he truly loves, then these words should come effortlessly. I can't thank you enough for your support my beautiful friend!
I am amazed Christian... this sparkles in the softest light of pink...
Utterly enchanting!... I am moved beyond words!
Every line takes me into another universe, one in which you have created..
A masterpiece!
"Whispered in reverberation
Keeping her in secret
The jewel of the galaxy
Echoing her back down gently
Upon the flutter of dragonfly wings
Carrying her into the night
Sparkling in pink romance
She's asleep and waiting for me once again
Where I always find her in my dreams
Waltzing the island I built for her
Covered in cherry blossoms
On shores of diamonds covered in pink romance."~ I can't get enough of this pink romance...(sigh)
Into my faves.~xoxo~:)
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Robbie!!!! You are unbelievable in your writings and to see you say this, makes me so proud. It's al.. read moreRobbie!!!! You are unbelievable in your writings and to see you say this, makes me so proud. It's always such a great pleasure to have you review my work! ;)
Lovely images painted in words, and as the trees are in blossom in my neighborhood right now, I could really relate to that side of the poem. The passion comes across strongly as well.
Good writing.
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Wow, I bet that's a lovely image to see, Noel. I'm so glad you liked it, you are an amazing writer, .. read moreWow, I bet that's a lovely image to see, Noel. I'm so glad you liked it, you are an amazing writer, and it makes me humbled. :)
That painting looks like it could have been done by Maxfield Parrish. The American born Pre-Raphaelite painter of the late 19th and early 20th century. The only reason I know that is I went to a Pre-Raphaelite exhibit in Washington DC with someone who went to art school. I paid attention during our walk through the exhibit so I actually learned something. I enjoyed this romantic fairy tale fantasy poem. Good work sir.
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I am a big fan of art and don't go as often as I should. Although, we don't have much around here wh.. read moreI am a big fan of art and don't go as often as I should. Although, we don't have much around here where I live. Glad you liked it my friend and thank you.
"Dust her in electric dreams" - such a perfect line. Seems you're on a cosmic roll my friend :) I loved this from start to finish, it's delicately romantic and rich in wonderful images. Well written. Penny
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Thank you so much, Penny. Always an honor to have you stop by. :)
Oh the Imagery once again, so beautiful :). I really like all your titles and how you are able to draw your readers in. Well done, you are really talented
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Renee, you're sooo sweet. I am truly honored by your reviews, ma'am. Thank you my dear poet!
Wow, this was really nice! I could almost smell the cherry blossom and the fine spring weather, imagining a pair of lovers under a tree where the guy is reading her a poem which reminded him of her, his beautiful love. It's like a real romantic scene from a movie, one with a very beautiful background and perfect script which just makes the audience go awww :3
Well done!
Awe I'm blown away by your wonderful review! It's so satisfying to be able to give that to a reader... read moreAwe I'm blown away by your wonderful review! It's so satisfying to be able to give that to a reader. BTW my grandmother's favorite flower is the purple azalea.
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oh, what a coincidence! I love purple azaleas too, my pseud is just a variation of that ;-)
a.. read moreoh, what a coincidence! I love purple azaleas too, my pseud is just a variation of that ;-)
and you are a very good poet, so you deserve awesome reviews :-D
Hmm...I looked, but did not find it. Probably because I do not remember the title of it, and there a.. read moreHmm...I looked, but did not find it. Probably because I do not remember the title of it, and there are just too many poems to look through.
Very delicate and gentle a beautiful
flower in the breeze what inspired this.
Thank you for sharing this Romantic piece.
Lovely lines here.
The shedding of cherry blossoms
Falls upon her face
Pink romance slips its breath
Underneath the lure of her skin
They dance amongst her spirit
Embracing her essence
Becoming her
Blessings. kindred poet
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Just love the color pink on a woman and cherry blossoms lol. Thank you my dear friend! :)
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You're very welcome. it's my pleasure. I love cherry blossoms also we don't have any here in Georgia.. read moreYou're very welcome. it's my pleasure. I love cherry blossoms also we don't have any here in Georgia but we get beautiful Tulip trees with pink flowers on them and Dog wood trees that have pink flowers on them and there is white ones also so very Beautiful though blessings. kindred poet
To sum me up is pretty easy. I love writing because it's therapy for my wayward soul. Although, I am by no means any good at it, I still put myself out there. I use to write when I was younger but gav.. more..