Star of the Horizon

Hope is all we really ever need.

 

 

Star of the Horizon

 

 

Will you lie with me in love

Frolic through fields of seeded dreams

Sleep on soft pillows of spoken words

From the forever waterfall we will leap

 

I can see the horizon of dancing stars

Knowing your eyes light them up brighter

On the water they burn holes

As I watch your soul transform them higher

 

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

So I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

So open your eyes and see

Where the horizons meet

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me

 

I fell into you hard

Not even my dreams were safe

You invaded every part

And filled in all the empty space

 

So,

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

And I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

I know that the miles stand in-between

So,

Just look at the horizon and see

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Quill~]

This felt like a song to me... your rhythmic flow combined with beautiful words are enchanting.
It's the hope of falling into your eyes, into your soul that mesmerize your readers.
I can see the stars, that how amazing you are. :)
Fantastic write, Christian!

[Chris Micha]

It is lyrics to a new song, you're absolutely right, Quill. Your powerful & sweet words go straight to my heart and I shall keep them there, always. Thank you! ;)

[Quill~]

:) I hope to hear it one day...it's in my heart too. :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Christian, this one is a romantic keeper. You did a phenomenal job communicating the stars in your partner's eyes.... absolutely beautiful. I love the pairing of this poem with the photograph. Great write!

[Chris Micha]

Wow!! Thank you for the amazing words.

[Brook]

"Will you lay with me in love
Frolic through fields of seeded dreams"
Such a gorgeous line.
I really am in love with the very last stanza, i think you have done such a brilliant job with this. I think this is probably my favourite of yours. Good job xo

[Chris Micha]

Brook, you are so sweet to say such things. I am truly honored my dear!

[Dancing_Elixir]

Beautiful piece, as usual.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear. I am taken aback by the words of a beautiful artist!

[Dancing_Elixir]

💗

[FireFox9]

Total agreement with Madalyn this is amazing. Beautiful man just beautiful. Fox-

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much for that!! :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Damnit, Christian!! This is powerful and romantic and absolutely beautiful! I love, love, love this write! How do you always capture me with your words alone?! I'll be looking at that horizon tonight, sweets!! This is definitely my absolute favorite! xo (:

[Chris Micha]

Wow...thank you Mads! You are so sweet to say this!