Star of the Horizon

Hope is all we really ever need.

 

 

Star of the Horizon

 

 

Will you lie with me in love

Frolic through fields of seeded dreams

Sleep on soft pillows of spoken words

From the forever waterfall we will leap

 

I can see the horizon of dancing stars

Knowing your eyes light them up brighter

On the water they burn holes

As I watch your soul transform them higher

 

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

So I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

So open your eyes and see

Where the horizons meet

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me

 

I fell into you hard

Not even my dreams were safe

You invaded every part

And filled in all the empty space

 

So,

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

And I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

I know that the miles stand in-between

So,

Just look at the horizon and see

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Quill~]

This felt like a song to me... your rhythmic flow combined with beautiful words are enchanting.
It's the hope of falling into your eyes, into your soul that mesmerize your readers.
I can see the stars, that how amazing you are. :)
Fantastic write, Christian!

[Chris Micha]

It is lyrics to a new song, you're absolutely right, Quill. Your powerful & sweet words go straight to my heart and I shall keep them there, always. Thank you! ;)

[Quill~]

:) I hope to hear it one day...it's in my heart too. :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

This is a beautiful poem. I love how it is describing the way that the person wants to be under the stars with the person that they love. Great Job.

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you so much, Crystal!! :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

Your Welcome.

[willweb]

This poem was quite beautiful. I enjoyed this.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much!!

[PWells]

well, with words like these I can see why all the girlies come a calling....BTW, knock-knock hahahaha

[Chris Micha]

Who's there? :)

[Shaquana Adams]

Great flow and imagery. What a romantic poem!
-QuanaWana

[Chris Micha]

Thank you again sweetheart! :)

[I Am Svetlana]

I feel this relates perfectly to a long distance relationship and yes, it the perfect form of romantic :) with my ex, he and I had a moment outside my house when we were first dating where he hugged me from behind, wrapping his arms around me and missed my forehead. Then leaned his head gently against mine as we began to sway back and forth looking up at the stars. To me, it was such a powerful moment and I remember just how beautiful it was. Now whenever I see a black night with bright stars out, I always picture that moment and wish to have it again. And hope is always a good thing to never forget...if you have no hope, then you can't have the power to believe all the time.

[I Am Svetlana]

Kissed my forehead, not missed*

[Mirra]

Oh so romantic! I like how it made me feel afloat haha I can totally relate to this! Love the imagery too. Excellent piece ^_^!

[Chris Micha]

I'm so honored you enjoyed it my dear :)

[Mirra]

You're welcome ^_^!

[lissalovesyou]

This is wonderful! I have added to favs~!
Every word is so powerful and strong and I feel like I'm going to type up every positive adjective I know. lol
And I really wish this gets turned into a song one day.
lissalovesyou:)

[Chris Micha]

You're amazing, Lisa! I truly am honored as always. Your support means the world. :)

[Cory Barrett]

And with these words... I am yours!

You just have to pay the bills. Great write sir

[Chris Micha]

Ha thank you my friend!! :)

[s y e]

Holy schmokes, this is stunning and so romantic!! Your wording and imagery is so powerful, they horizon is a really special place for two people who are in love to meet, especially if they aren't together at the time... You touched my heart.

[Chris Micha]

Awe my sweet, Sye!! You are so sweet my dear and it touches my heart that you like it. Thank you so much sweets!! :)