Star of the Horizon

Hope is all we really ever need.

 

 

Star of the Horizon

 

 

Will you lie with me in love

Frolic through fields of seeded dreams

Sleep on soft pillows of spoken words

From the forever waterfall we will leap

 

I can see the horizon of dancing stars

Knowing your eyes light them up brighter

On the water they burn holes

As I watch your soul transform them higher

 

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

So I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

So open your eyes and see

Where the horizons meet

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me

 

I fell into you hard

Not even my dreams were safe

You invaded every part

And filled in all the empty space

 

So,

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

And I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

I know that the miles stand in-between

So,

Just look at the horizon and see

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Quill~]

This felt like a song to me... your rhythmic flow combined with beautiful words are enchanting.
It's the hope of falling into your eyes, into your soul that mesmerize your readers.
I can see the stars, that how amazing you are. :)
Fantastic write, Christian!

[Chris Micha]

It is lyrics to a new song, you're absolutely right, Quill. Your powerful & sweet words go straight to my heart and I shall keep them there, always. Thank you! ;)

[Quill~]

:) I hope to hear it one day...it's in my heart too. :)

[The StoryTeller]

This was good. I know what you said on your about me, but I think you're a really good writer, judging by this. I like it, it really creates the tone of desperation. It shows how us humans are incomplete and need others, need love. Even if it's just for one moment, just for one life, just for one time. We just need to fall into them, and be ourselves, and have someone there with us. This kind of seemed more like a song to me. I don't know. Anyways, I like it. Great write. :)

[Blue]

Love the clever imagery in this one. Definitely wonderful, this poem is.

[Luna Zerimar]

Romanticizing. Your words really feel calm, and peaceful.

Every line had so much emotion in it.

Made me smile. There's butterflies in my stomach!

Great write, sir.

[MagicAl]

I seriously LOVE your work!!..I love the way you draw the reader in, as though your speaking directly to us. You manage to create such an overwhelming sense of longing and desire.. A really good sensual write.. :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Magic :)

[MagicAl]

You're welcome.. :)

[Bluefire]

This makes me think of a song, it has got its own tune to it.
Soft and sweet, like the night sky and stars above.
Well done. ^^

[Inky Blacket]

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! (Like always) :) It was so... descriptive. I liked how you worded it like you were saying it to someone... Your poems remind me of someone I used to know. -Inky Blacket

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Inky! I appreciate it. :)

[Sasha]

This is absolutely amazing !!
Loved every part of it !
Well written ! :)

[Chris Micha]

I am so happy to hear that, Sasha. It's always a validation when I hear this. Thank you! :)

[Sasha]

your most welcome ! =D

[Ashley Griffiths]

Another great piece, Christian! There is always something on the horizon….

[Chris Micha]

Yes it is, Ashley. Thank you so much! :)