Our Invisible Connection

The connection of unconditional love.

Our Invisible Connection

 

Sometimes I see the most brilliant stars when I close my eyes at night

I often wonder if those are the stars being viewed through your eyes so bright

And I’m in awe

My son who is my everything

Through the day I get glimpses of extraordinary things

Magical angels with protecting eyes and guardian wings

And I’m comforted

My son who is my everything

More often than not I feel myself being pulled in your direction

My mind is filled with the sense of longing for love & affection

And I’m lonely

My son who is my everything

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But no matter the distance that divides you & I

No matter how many times we hold our heads and cry

We will persevere

My son who is my everything

For our love will always keep us as close as we could ever be

We are always together you & me

Always tethering

My son who is my everything!

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Indeed I love my kids the same way.They light the darkness and make everything better and worth it :)

[Chris Micha]

Oh I know my dear!!! They are the light.

[Vidya Bacchus]

That they are :)

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

AWWWW, This is so cute. I love this and you need to write more!! Good job!

[Chris Micha]

I'm so honored!! Thank you soooo much! :)

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

If you could, would you mind reading some of my stuff? I'm sorry for the spam but I don't get many reveiws or comments.

[Chris Micha]

Sure...feel free to send me requests!!

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

KK

[NoelHC]

Well written, I always like to see repetition in a poem, and this repeating line works well, tying each verse together.
Good job, Christian.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my friend for the kind words of encouragement!!

[BloodySkye]

Yes this is truly unconditional love and what a wonderful words written. Made me smile.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear! Your words mean so much!

[BloodySkye]

Always welcome :)

[Ruth]

Ah, this is so touching...a beautiful piece, showing many sides to unconditional love...truly lovely poem x

[Chris Micha]

My dear thank you for your beautiful words that mean so much!!

[Ruth]

My pleasure hon x

[Kyle Lawrence]

My brother doesn't get to see his son that often and I can visibly see his pain. Great poem, truly!

[Chris Micha]

I so feel him pain bro! Thank you for sharing that with me!!!

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow, Christian!! Seriously, this is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt. Your son... Wow. I can only imagine the love a father must have for his child. You express is powerfully here! I am in awe, absolute awe!! Fantastic write!! xo (:

[Chris Micha]

Awe Mads you're gonna make me cry in my Cool Ranch Doritos!! Thank you my dear, it means a lot!!!