Key to the Universe

If she only knew...

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Key to the Universe

.....by Christian Gallagher

 

If they only knew...

 

...that I possess within me, the key to the universe

They would torment my mind with their affliction

To gain access to the power from her beautiful untapped potential

 

She possesses a magical mystical gift

That can change the chemistry of the hearts & minds of every man

Her imagery alone can send time in a tailspin

He's always trying to stop to take her with him

But she resists time after time

 

She harnesses the light of a trillion suns

That radiates through her electric-blue eyes

 

A billion hearts would stop, just to beat for her once

 

Her words will whip a man's brain into a frenzy

Causing sanity to take off on a beautiful crazy journey

 

They would risk it all for just one memory

 

To be one deep exhaled breath from her lungs.

 

And here I am...

 

...a man with a secret

 

The secret of where the key exists

That's locked away in a place where no one will find it

A place it will wait, until the universe is in front of me

 

Then I shall open up the lock and walk into this enchanted mystical place

Where I will close the door and lock her from the men who give chase

 

I can imagine the unseen beauty, the walls of gorgeous graffiti it displays

Any cracks or holes will be repaired with my untold love

Nurtured with my soul I have opened to roam free within

 

Light any stars that have dimmed and give them life again

Be the caretaker of this vastly expanding universe

The guardian that will serve and protect her most guarded secrets

 

Most of all I would live happy inside this universe

And stand tall & proud

In the center of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Picture is of a beautiful friend, Erika.

Reviews

[Cory Barrett]

If you have the key to your universe, hide it forever, never let it go, and always remember where it is. Many of us are looking for the very same key, and many of us will not find it, and often do not deserve it. The most important thing when you have the key is to pay attention to the entry, because the lock will be changed it the door is neglected. Great write, It really made me think. Thank you.

[Chris Micha]

Such amazing words kind, sir! So glad you dug this piece and I thank you!!

[michele vera]

Hi Christian, Another Absolutely Beautiful Poem! It's always a Pleasure Reading Your Works! A True Romantic, such a Valued Quality in an Individual! Excellent as Always!

[Chris Micha]

Hey Michele, you know how honored I am for you to review my work. It truly means a lot! ;)

[michele vera]

Thank You so Much Christian, I feel the same. It is always an Honor to Read Your Work, and receive Reviews from You. Your Talent is Unending. Every Poem Of Yours is a True Display of Absolute Brilliance and Heart-Felt Emotion!

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

This is a very good poem. I can see the fame inside of this poem. You might be really famous one day! You might want to concider making a concrete poem, which is a poem put it makes a shape. I believe in you.

[Chris Micha]

You are so sweet, thank you!! It means so much :)

[SpeakToMeTheTruth]

You're welcome, you deserve sweet comments like this.

[Sasha]

"And here I am...

...a man with a secret

The secret of where the key exists
That's locked away in a place where no one will find it
A place it will wait, until the universe is in front of me"

Beautiful !

[Sasha]

"And here I am...

...a man with a secret

The secret of where the key exists
That's locked away in a place where no one will find it
A place it will wait, until the universe is in front of me"

Beautiful !

[Chris Micha]

Sasha, thank you so much for the wonderful review. :)

[Sasha]

your welcome ! :)

[Dancing_Elixir]

Such a beautiful piece., it is one of my favorites - and not because I am at all partial. You are very talented.

[Chris Micha]

Wha wha!!!! Who is this lady that be dropping words of candy on here? :) So glad you joined sweets!!! I so look forward in this.... ;)

[Dancing_Elixir]

lol, just wanted to keep an eye on you ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

"Key to the universe." What if you turn the key and the universe starts going the other way? Chicks can drive you crazy though. No matter which direction the universe is going.

[Chris Micha]

Then everything just starts happening in reverse. Imagine that.... :)

[Sami Khalil]

I just love it. An episode of great proportion. You do it best...:)......................

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my dear friend! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................

[Tom]

This poem exemplifies and personifies the power of love through exquisite metaphor choice and creative imagery, splendid indeed!

[Chris Micha]

Tom, thank you for such amazing words and review. I can't tell you how much it means!

[Ahmed Sayed]

Nice idea and very well choice of words, they really described it well

[Chris Micha]

Many thanks Ahmed, and thank you for stopping in!