This Moment

Special are the little moments, often taken for granted.

This Moment


The Sun was just peeking through the bedroom window

Slowly moving up from your feet to take you all in

But this morning I was the first to gently brush your sleeping face

And he nodded to congratulate me in my win

How lucky I am to be this close to you

To be near the adventures of your dreams

To hear the soft subtle air from your lungs

And the morning angels as they sing

These are the precious gems of life

One of the rarest I'll ever see

A Gift the universe has granted

This moment that was given to me

If I never get this moment again

My eyes no longer open to witness

May the Sun & angels watch over you

And wrap my sleeping beauty in their kisses.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is so damn beautiful, Christian. Seriously, I think I melted in the caress of your words. I love this piece so much. I am lost in this instance of a moment you have described and my mind doesn't want to release it. This is dripping an intoxicating love into my veins. Definitely another favorite of mine. Stunning write. Absolutely stunning. xo (:

[Chris Micha]

WOW!!!!!!
I am truly speechless Madalyn. You have made my day with your amazing words. All I can say is thank you and tell you how much of an honor it is. You're an amazing talented writer who I have much respect for. Thank you!!! :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Stop that!! We're on your page. Flattery goes to you!! ..But, thank you. Everything I said was well deserved with this poem. I couldn't stop coming back and reading it! (:

[Mercy Fae]

This is truly the best poem I've read. Amazing.

[Chris Micha]

Wow! I must say that this is truly an honor! I am so grateful. :)

[Faith Almazan]

This had such vivid imagery. Beautiful!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Faith! :)

[MagicAl]

Beautifully written Christian. Really enjoyed this poem.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much Magic :)

[s y e]

Oh my, Batman, this is beautiful and so romantic. It must be so special waking up to someone you care for and love so much. You expressed the beauty in your poem.

[Chris Micha]

Awe thanks darlin'!! I'm really glad you liked it. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh i like this much...there is something so special in feeling to be the first one to greet a love in the morning...
to go to sleep with a kiss and wake up with one as well.

moment to savor...and even if we only have that one sunny morning...it is all worth it.

[Chris Micha]

So true Jacob, these moments are to be savoured! I truly appreciate your words! :)