This Moment

Special are the little moments, often taken for granted.

This Moment


The Sun was just peeking through the bedroom window

Slowly moving up from your feet to take you all in

But this morning I was the first to gently brush your sleeping face

And he nodded to congratulate me in my win

How lucky I am to be this close to you

To be near the adventures of your dreams

To hear the soft subtle air from your lungs

And the morning angels as they sing

These are the precious gems of life

One of the rarest I'll ever see

A Gift the universe has granted

This moment that was given to me

If I never get this moment again

My eyes no longer open to witness

May the Sun & angels watch over you

And wrap my sleeping beauty in their kisses.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is so damn beautiful, Christian. Seriously, I think I melted in the caress of your words. I love this piece so much. I am lost in this instance of a moment you have described and my mind doesn't want to release it. This is dripping an intoxicating love into my veins. Definitely another favorite of mine. Stunning write. Absolutely stunning. xo (:

[Chris Micha]

WOW!!!!!!
I am truly speechless Madalyn. You have made my day with your amazing words. All I can say is thank you and tell you how much of an honor it is. You're an amazing talented writer who I have much respect for. Thank you!!! :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Stop that!! We're on your page. Flattery goes to you!! ..But, thank you. Everything I said was well deserved with this poem. I couldn't stop coming back and reading it! (:

[Ruth]

My god - this played my heart strings with a damn fine tune! Beautiful :) x

[Chris Micha]

Awe Poppy, that is super sweet of you and I am so proud to hear you say that. Thank you!!! :)

[Ashley Griffiths]

This is a sweet, heart-felt poem that is dripping with emotion. Great job!

[Chris Micha]

So grateful for your visit Ashley. Thank you!! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Such a sweet piece!

These are the precious gems of life
One of the rarest I'll ever see
A Gift the universe has granted
This moment that was given to me

The little moments really are precious. Its great to embrace every little moment.
Sweet piece my friend.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear Natalie. Love seeing you around!

[FlamingPhoenix]

This is so touching in its gentle and loving beauty. What a splendid treasure to read it right before I venture into dreamland. Thank you immensely for sharing!

[Chris Micha]

Awe I'm honored you like it dear! Sleep well :)

[lissalovesyou]

I think this is the loveliest, sweetest, and most beautiful poem that you have ever written. The sun nodding, the morning angels, the precious gem of life...Well, this is truly amazing.
I have never read anything with such a strong positive power(does that even make sense?) but this one shows it all. Write on!
lissalovesyou:)

[Chris Micha]

I am taken back by that! I'm truly speechless in honor my dear. Thank you so much!!!

[lissalovesyou]

Keep up the awesomeness!
lissalovesyou:)

[Aethereal]

You described a beautiful early morning moment here. I was inspired to write this tiny gift song-poem for your which you may keep as your own:

Morning Moment

As sun rays embraced our bed,
while asleep, I brushed his hair.
as this golden covering spread
he thanked me for being there.

[Chris Micha]

That's amazing! I'm truly honored to have this on here. Wonderful...thank you! :)

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[Mary Ochoa]

Such a beautiful and sweet Poem Christian! Amazing work friend!!! :)

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you so much Mary :)

[NoelHC]

Extremely well written, I loved the image of the sun, nodding and congratulating you. You have a real talent for this type of poem, and can conjure up such vivid images.

Good work!

[Chris Micha]

Hey my friend!! Thank you so much for the awesome review!! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is so sweet, Christian!

I can envision many loves in this scenario... it could be for any Angel..
Such as a little one sleeping in your bed to be comforted from a nightmare or a scary storm.
There is no doubt "Love" resides in your poetic heart.

Nicely done! :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you sweet Robbie! So glad to have you stop by with those great words! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure. :)

[yash]

Filled with so positive vibes, man this is really a very nice poem and the first one i would ever be rating above 90. It's dripping of pure love. I'm not exaggerating, it's really a great one, at-least i found it so..

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much Yash! Means a lot sir!!

[yash]

It deserves!!