This Moment

Special are the little moments, often taken for granted.

This Moment


The Sun was just peeking through the bedroom window

Slowly moving up from your feet to take you all in

But this morning I was the first to gently brush your sleeping face

And he nodded to congratulate me in my win

How lucky I am to be this close to you

To be near the adventures of your dreams

To hear the soft subtle air from your lungs

And the morning angels as they sing

These are the precious gems of life

One of the rarest I'll ever see

A Gift the universe has granted

This moment that was given to me

If I never get this moment again

My eyes no longer open to witness

May the Sun & angels watch over you

And wrap my sleeping beauty in their kisses.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is so damn beautiful, Christian. Seriously, I think I melted in the caress of your words. I love this piece so much. I am lost in this instance of a moment you have described and my mind doesn't want to release it. This is dripping an intoxicating love into my veins. Definitely another favorite of mine. Stunning write. Absolutely stunning. xo (:

[Chris Micha]

WOW!!!!!!
I am truly speechless Madalyn. You have made my day with your amazing words. All I can say is thank you and tell you how much of an honor it is. You're an amazing talented writer who I have much respect for. Thank you!!! :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Stop that!! We're on your page. Flattery goes to you!! ..But, thank you. Everything I said was well deserved with this poem. I couldn't stop coming back and reading it! (:

[Emilia A]

So sweet and wonderful. The little things are truly life's precious gifts. I love this poem.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much Emilia. I'm glad you liked it as much as I did writing it.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow so beautiful loved this.


Breathtaking... here.

May the Sun & angels watch over you

And wrap my sleeping beauty in their kisses.


Thank you for sharing. blessings. kindred poet

[Chris Micha]

Thank you for stopping by and gracing me with your words! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. blessings. kindred poet

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is definitely one of my favorite poems by you.

[Chris Micha]

Really? Wow, now that's saying something coming from an amazing writer as yourself, Brittany. I couldn't be more honored than I am now. :)

[keepwritingkate]

This poem makes me long for a love of the ages. I love how simple an action it is to watch the sun rise while laying next to a loved one and yet it is one of the most emotionally deep moments one can experience. You truly capture this moment beautifully! This is a wonderful poem.

[Chris Micha]

You're so right, these moments should be cherished always. Thank you for your beautiful review!! :)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This is what peace is .....these moments .....cherished ...in love with love. It's so bright I can barely look at it head on...It's you ....shining.....supreme!

[Chris Micha]

Wow! You warmed my heart with your words. I want you to know it means so much to me! Thank you!

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely, reflective, emotive poem. Your writing is truly eclectic.

[Chris Micha]

That's amazing coming from a beautiful poet as yourself. Thank you!! :)

[Matilda]

This makes my heart feel warm. So beautiful!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Matilda, glad to see you! :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was beautiful and sweet. Waking up next to that special someone, greatest feeling in the world. Xo Winter

[Chris Micha]

Yes, it is, but I have forgotten that feeling :(

[FlatLineBeauty]

Same here but I do miss it