This Moment

Special are the little moments, often taken for granted.

This Moment


The Sun was just peeking through the bedroom window

Slowly moving up from your feet to take you all in

But this morning I was the first to gently brush your sleeping face

And he nodded to congratulate me in my win

How lucky I am to be this close to you

To be near the adventures of your dreams

To hear the soft subtle air from your lungs

And the morning angels as they sing

These are the precious gems of life

One of the rarest I'll ever see

A Gift the universe has granted

This moment that was given to me

If I never get this moment again

My eyes no longer open to witness

May the Sun & angels watch over you

And wrap my sleeping beauty in their kisses.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is so damn beautiful, Christian. Seriously, I think I melted in the caress of your words. I love this piece so much. I am lost in this instance of a moment you have described and my mind doesn't want to release it. This is dripping an intoxicating love into my veins. Definitely another favorite of mine. Stunning write. Absolutely stunning. xo (:

[Chris Micha]

WOW!!!!!!
I am truly speechless Madalyn. You have made my day with your amazing words. All I can say is thank you and tell you how much of an honor it is. You're an amazing talented writer who I have much respect for. Thank you!!! :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Stop that!! We're on your page. Flattery goes to you!! ..But, thank you. Everything I said was well deserved with this poem. I couldn't stop coming back and reading it! (:

[Dancing_Elixir]

This was the first poem you sent me a link to. I love reading it as much now as I did then...

[razormuse]

So touching & emotional. Sometimes we write about people who don't even exist, if this was written for someone it is a pure & beautiful homage to true love. Perfect

[John Anderson]

Your talent is amazing. A masterfully penned poem

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, it truly means a lot!!!!!

[MsJewel]

You have outdone yourself...this is possibly one of the most beautiful romantic poems I have read on this site...stunning my friend.

:) Julie

100/100 special moments

[Chris Micha]

Julie, you are amazing by saying such great things my darling! I am blown away by you and I thank you from the bottom of my heart!

[Rim]

I always love it when reading love poems written from a male perspective, but this is just amazing ..

[Chris Micha]

Rim, it's amazing to hear that. It's truly an honor to have such words said. Thank you :)

[Girl With A Pen]

Your writing style has taken my breath away! I am enthralled in by this poem. Beautiful, enchanting, and astonishing! My favorite poem so far

[Chris Micha]

Wow Angela, thank you so very much for your words. I'm truly honored! :)

[Girl With A Pen]

:) Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece

[Emily]

Love the wording! Well done.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much!

[Frontier]

"If I never get this moment again

My eyes no longer open to witness " i I really liked this line, I find its really deep and says a lot so simply. Lovely poem.

[Chris Micha]

So wonderful to hear my dear! Thank you!!