L.A. Sunset

L.A. Sunset

A Poem by Chris Micha
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She's beyond beautiful...

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L.A. Sunset

I French kissed the gypsy morning sun
Under sheets of heavy breaths
Rode my lips over peaks of pure pleasure
Down valleys into her depths

Warm-tingling rays touched my vampire-pale skin
As I soared through her undulating skies
A gravitational force attracted my thoughts
Then I heard her energetic cries

Her peak occured at High Noon
I watched with eyes of amazement
And I fell in love with her that day
When she sang her dynamic arrangement

Her body began to grow weary
Trying to keep up with my feverish pace
So she began her magical decent
Down into her hiding place

The day came to a close
And that was the end of her and I
As I watched her set fire to
The horizon of the red-velvet L.A. sky.

© 2014 Chris Micha


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I came back to show
your work some love.


Thank you again for your
Kind Review on Past Ghosts of the Asylum
and thank you for Your Inspiring work anyone
that inspires the write I will let others know
how the write was Inspired.

Just about anything Inspires me that's
all thanks to My lord and Savior but I am
also thankful to be able to read others work.


All I can say is WOW you painted
a beautiful Canvas poem here.


Loved these stanza's lines here.

Her body began to grow weary
Trying to keep up with my feverish pace
So she began her magical decent
Down into her hiding place

The day came to a close
And that was the end of her and I
As I watched her set fire to
The horizon of the red-velvet L.A. sky.


Thank you for sharing. and thank you for
your kind review again. Blessings. Kindred poet


This will go into my General reading

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Awe wow! Thank you so very much for that amazing review. It's truly an honor to hear this :)
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome my friend. Blessings. Kindred poet



Reviews

This is an extremely dynamic piece! I love it.. Sunsets are a sort of obsession of mine and this one is painted beautifully before the reader. You have a natural way with words that doesn't seem to drag on-it's just enough. This is perfect!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Wow..thank you so much, Kacie. I am truly honored, ma'am :)
KacieLynn

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome! Anytime:)
I love how sensual this piece. Its like it slowly caresses my skin. I know that makes no sense but that's the best way I can describe it :)

Her peak occured at High Noon
I watched with eyes of amazement
And I fell in love with her that day
When she sang her dynamic arrangement

My favorite part. Great piece!!


Posted 10 Years Ago


Natalie Dieudonne

10 Years Ago

Its okay buddy, just as long as you don't forget about me :)
Awww, you know I love reading yo.. read more
Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Never ever ever ever! :)
Natalie Dieudonne

10 Years Ago

That's good to know ;)
Wow. Beautiful piece! A day of love. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Rose :)
Awesome poem. The thought of a vampire watching the sun and the sunset catching fire instead of the vampire is genius. So enjoyed this one!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Brianna, I am honored that you found it that enjoyable. Thank you so much :)
A amazing poem. The words alive and strong. I wanted to read more. You make the words create place and good vision. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Hey my friend. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. :)
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome. I enjoyed the poem.
Wow You have written such a beautiful and seductive poem! Loved it! Great work friend! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweet, Mary! :)
Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

You're Welcome Christian!:)
Wow! Took my breath away :-). I found this piece delightfully magical~drawing me in at the fist line. And your mention of vampire--let's just say, I'm hooked on this one and will be adding it to my library :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Phoenix. Sorry it's taken me this long to respond. I am truly honored my dear friend. :)
Well this is a very romantic sunset and extremely beautiful the way you've painted its picture with jeweled words. I never heard of a sunset being described such as this one. Intriguing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chris Micha

10 Years Ago

She was one of the most beautiful! Thank you for your wonderful reviews! :)

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Added on May 2, 2014
Last Updated on May 5, 2014
Tags: love, passion, set free

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Chris Micha
Chris Micha

Richland, MS



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To sum me up is pretty easy. I love writing because it's therapy for my wayward soul. Although, I am by no means any good at it, I still put myself out there. I use to write when I was younger but gav.. more..

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