L.A. Sunset

She's beyond beautiful...

L.A. Sunset

I French kissed the gypsy morning sun
Under sheets of heavy breaths
Rode my lips over peaks of pure pleasure
Down valleys into her depths

Warm-tingling rays touched my vampire-pale skin
As I soared through her undulating skies
A gravitational force attracted my thoughts
Then I heard her energetic cries

Her peak occured at High Noon
I watched with eyes of amazement
And I fell in love with her that day
When she sang her dynamic arrangement

Her body began to grow weary
Trying to keep up with my feverish pace
So she began her magical decent
Down into her hiding place

The day came to a close
And that was the end of her and I
As I watched her set fire to
The horizon of the red-velvet L.A. sky.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I came back to show
your work some love.


Thank you again for your
Kind Review on Past Ghosts of the Asylum
and thank you for Your Inspiring work anyone
that inspires the write I will let others know
how the write was Inspired.

Just about anything Inspires me that's
all thanks to My lord and Savior but I am
also thankful to be able to read others work.


All I can say is WOW you painted
a beautiful Canvas poem here.


Loved these stanza's lines here.

Her body began to grow weary
Trying to keep up with my feverish pace
So she began her magical decent
Down into her hiding place

The day came to a close
And that was the end of her and I
As I watched her set fire to
The horizon of the red-velvet L.A. sky.


Thank you for sharing. and thank you for
your kind review again. Blessings. Kindred poet


This will go into my General reading

[Chris Micha]

Awe wow! Thank you so very much for that amazing review. It's truly an honor to hear this :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome my friend. Blessings. Kindred poet

[KacieLynn]

This is an extremely dynamic piece! I love it.. Sunsets are a sort of obsession of mine and this one is painted beautifully before the reader. You have a natural way with words that doesn't seem to drag on-it's just enough. This is perfect!

[Chris Micha]

Wow..thank you so much, Kacie. I am truly honored, ma'am :)

[KacieLynn]

You are very welcome! Anytime:)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I love how sensual this piece. Its like it slowly caresses my skin. I know that makes no sense but that's the best way I can describe it :)

Her peak occured at High Noon
I watched with eyes of amazement
And I fell in love with her that day
When she sang her dynamic arrangement

My favorite part. Great piece!!

[Chris Micha]

I'm sorry, Natalie for the long delay. You my dear make it all worth while writing. I am honored by your words my dear friend :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Its okay buddy, just as long as you don't forget about me :)
Awww, you know I love reading your work.

[Chris Micha]

Never ever ever ever! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

That's good to know ;)

[Awakened Rose]

Wow. Beautiful piece! A day of love. Thank you for sharing :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Rose :)

[Brianna Brie]

Awesome poem. The thought of a vampire watching the sun and the sunset catching fire instead of the vampire is genius. So enjoyed this one!

[Chris Micha]

Brianna, I am honored that you found it that enjoyable. Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. The words alive and strong. I wanted to read more. You make the words create place and good vision. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Micha]

Hey my friend. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed the poem.

[Mary Ochoa]

Wow You have written such a beautiful and seductive poem! Loved it! Great work friend! :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you sweet, Mary! :)

[Mary Ochoa]

You're Welcome Christian!:)

[FlamingPhoenix]

Wow! Took my breath away :-). I found this piece delightfully magical~drawing me in at the fist line. And your mention of vampire--let's just say, I'm hooked on this one and will be adding it to my library :-)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you, Phoenix. Sorry it's taken me this long to respond. I am truly honored my dear friend. :)

[BloodySkye]

Well this is a very romantic sunset and extremely beautiful the way you've painted its picture with jeweled words. I never heard of a sunset being described such as this one. Intriguing.

[Chris Micha]

She was one of the most beautiful! Thank you for your wonderful reviews! :)