(In)(Sane)

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(In)(Sane)

 

A CRAZY WORLD EXISTS

IN A SMALL WHITE PADDED ROOM

Where reality

is

?

 

He’s Shadow Boxing

demons

Crying at their

Silly faces

Laughing  tears

of

confusion

Powered by Lithium

while

Orderly Robots

From space

shuffle out thorazine

As He

puts on his

unemotional

poker face

to prepare for

the game

 

He’s

Dripping drip drops

Of

Drool

On dark

Drifting dreams

Walking on pillows

Of cotton

In room

Cloud 9

Swaying

To the

Swooshing

Song

Of the

Spaceship’s engine

Waving at

aliens

While he’s out

on his

ride

 

He’s

the star

in his own episode

Of a

 looney tunes

cartoon

Watching

A ward

of

wonderous

wild

pack of

Worry warts

Wiggling

To get away

When suddenly

The orderly robots

from space

Wisk him

Back to

Room cloud 9

Where

He finds himself

 Levitating

Above a bed

of hungry

Leaches

out for his blood

That feed like a hungry pack of

razors

When his

blue blood

Turns

Red

 

frightened

by the sight

there's a brief moment

Of insanity

And

he 

wakes

Up

In a

lone

urine stained bed

in a small

white padded

room.

Reviews

[BloodySkye]

Awesome! The rhythm in this is epic and kept me going. I actually heard a beat in my head along with some trippy music to go along with it. The story woven here is eclectic, fun, yet twisted into something deliciously dangerous and mental, with a side of surrealism. I love the way you wrote it, your style is growing on me. Unique but awesome.

[Sami Khalil]

Insane but not in same. Some see it in blue blood and others in red. It could be political poem of both parties are insane or they think the other is. Excellent...:)............

[Chris Micha]

;) you never cease to amaze me...brilliant friend! Thank you as I'm truly honored Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)..............

[Cory Barrett]

Ok, i will admit i thought i was going to hate this... But I loved it. Its f*****g nuts! I don't know what to make of it all and i really don't care, so entertaining, thank you!

[Chris Micha]

Haha...that's probably the best review ever and honest!! Thank you sir, that was awesome. :)

[Alveron]

I love the way in which you are able to capture the descent into madness and process of the mind becoming unhinged. Great Job

[Chris Micha]

Awesome...I'm glad you caught that and I thank you!

[star73]

padded rooms soul asylum straight jacket that's about sums it up! LOL

[Chris Micha]

Sounds like fun times ;)

[star73]

:) lmao a little to much fun!

[s y e]

Ha, I could swear you're my brother or something... You and I are definitely related. You my dear friend, are definitely insane, as am I - quite proud of it too. However, this write is amazing. Reality is so unique to us all... I LOVED this one... made me laugh in places too.

Oh and... I get it!

[Chris Micha]

Well...my blood runs deep in Scotland, so....
Thank you my sweet friend, means a lot! :)

[s y e]

Ha, maybe we are siblings... LOL!
Always a pleasure.

[s y e]

I GET IT, WOO! I GET IT I GET IT!!! ;-) who's the smart one now huh? Craycray dude!!!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

So you've met my family have you ?LOL Drugs, no drugs....It seldom makes life go away. white rooms are just where it all begins and ends. yes, job skillfully done.

[Chris Micha]

Haha....well I have probably met some who are borderline psycho lol. Thanks so much for the review! :)

[Glass Heart Inc]

At least he's having some sort of adventure in there... I liked this. I actually want to see people like this, ask them questions and hear what reality's like for them. You're poem is really awesome! Thumbs up.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear. I also would love to get inside the head of someone like this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very entertaining tale of mystery and wonder. I like the visions create by the strong description. I wanted to read more. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Micha]

Thanks my friend! Most readers get bored with too much writing, so I try to keep it limited. lol
read moreThanks my friend! Most readers get bored with too much writing, so I try to keep it limited. lol
I really appreciate your review!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good stories will be read. Thank you for sharing your work.

[Ruth]

Holy...this is full circle - includes so many elements of psychosis and yet rationality also - there's the mind warp! lol Awesome, enjoyed - what the hell is reality anyway - unique to each of us and perception is too x

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much Poppy! You're so right by saying reality is unique to each of us. I'm so glad you liked it! :)