My Imaginarium's Projector

My Imaginarium's Projector

Still playing in my theatre
On my imaginarium's projector
Recorded through synaptic lenses
I watch a vivid beautiful memory

Her Jovani-Persian-red-ornate dress
Set fire to my eyes
I imagined what it would look like
On the floor, in my mind

The watermelon martini
Was reflecting in her sparkling-blues
Causing multiple colors to mingle
Creating intoxicating hues

Her curly-dirty blonde hair
Was bouncing on golden springs
Getting high on the night
And the wings of the spirited drinks

Her naked-natural pink lips
Were syncing to a Lionel Richie song
Inviting me to come play with her--
"All Night Long"

That "Come here!" innocent grin
Was all I needed to hear
She sent the words "I want you!"
Ringing deep into my ears

In a candle scented room
Her hands were asking for more
I unzipped the Persian-red-ornate dress
And it fell willingly to the floor

The cool-silk Egyptian sheets
Welcomed two hot-excited bodies
That was quickly solidfied in history
A moment that defied all logic.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

I love this! What a beautiful story you told. The imagery and passion was intoxicating and you lured out desires for my dress to be on the floor. Oh, and now I can't get "All night long" out of my head! Hahaha! Fantastic work! Favorite for sure! xo (:

[Chris Micha]

Awesome!!! Thank you so much Madalyn. :)

[Chris Micha]

I could see her dance, in that (as I imagine kind of Spanish red-flamenco dress) to add another country there ;-) that turns around in a perfect circle, around her axle while she dances. This is so utterly beautifully written Christian, it's the perfect romance, seen through the eyes of a man. Well done ;)

- Elisa

[Chris Micha]

Awe I love how you put that. I am proud and honored you liked it. Thank you Elisa!! ;)

You are very welcome! Christian. I enjoy reading your work. It's my pleasure ;)

[s y e]

Holy schmokes dude, this is a lovely little ditty here. I loved the story you told, the passion, the imagery and the wording all just makes this poems a delightful read. What a night this guy had, must have been one of the best, aha. This is flawless. :) Well done, dudeee!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my dear! It was a fun night.... ;)~

[s y e]

Of course it was, you wrote it. ;)

[Margo Seuss]

Such a night this guy had! I love how you told a story in the form of poetry. I have attempted this myself; it is challenging! The only problem I have with this is the inconsistency with ryhme. You ryhmed blues and hues, more and floor, but eyes and mind don't ryhme nor do bodies and logic. As far as I'm concerned this poem sounded great when I read it. You're very good at expressing yourself and your ideas through poetry. I find I tend to rely too much on ryhme. Nothing was forced here! A job well done!

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much Margo! I like to break poetry rules and anger the Gods ha. ;)

[Margo Seuss]

A poet rebel I see!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow Chris I loved this.Every single line is perfect and your story is flawless and sensual as hell :)

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you Vidya!! Glad you liked it. ;)~

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Chris :)

[Ashley Griffiths]

I like the flow of this piece and the movement of the story to great conclusion. You don't waste any words building up the story.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Ashley. Glad you stopped by! :)

[melissa]

This is an awesome poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[Chris Micha]

Thanks Melissa :)

[melissa]

you're welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

You took me to good places in the poem.
"Her curly-dirty blonde hair
Was bouncing on golden springs
Getting high on the night
And the wings of the spirited drinks '
Visions of beauty and wild dances keep us young and hopeful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my friend. I'm honored Coyote! :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was a pretty hot and passionate write. Xo Winter

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Winter :)

[FlamingPhoenix]

Wow! Exquisite imagery--very detailed--and what a thrilling ride! Yum!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much. I really appteciate it. :)

[star73]

that's pretty intensifying! very creative and steamy hot!!!

[Chris Micha]

Well thank you Star! It was a lot more steamy than this, but I tamed it lol. :)

[star73]

right i bet you did lmao lol!