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We're all just mildly twisted!! Okay maybe severely!

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A twisted mind

With twisted images

Twists a pen

Forming twisted words

Into twisted verse

Causing twisted thoughts

To twist out of control.

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Reviews

[NoelHC]

I often see reviewers on here that do not like the use of repetition, however there are cases when repetition is extremely effective. This short poem is on of those cases, it make your point so well.

Another great piece of writing, the way you introduced it with
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[Chris Micha]

Noel, thank you for that awesome review sir!! It truly means a lot. :)

[NoelHC]

Damn, the formatting didn't keep TWISTED at an angle in my comment. And my sentence should have read "This short poem is onE of those cases"

[Chris Micha]

Well I certainly got it! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this. Pair it with Korn's Twisted Transistor (or some equally twisted tune more to your taste) and some play with form and font -- a good read.

[Chris Micha]

Great idea. Thank you for the review! :)

[Rose Black]

We are all twisted in some way. You may choose to embrace the twisted part of you or look it away. For me embracing the twisted in me is a lot more fun =D

[Chris Micha]

Love to be twisted haha Thank you! :)

[Rose Black]

lol XD not really i like to be the one doing the twisting... and i'll leave it at that

[Chris Micha]

Lmao!!....

[Rose Black]

Glad i amuze you ;-)

[Chris Micha]

I needed it :-P

[Rose Black]

Then I think you owe me a thank you, no? ;-D

[Chris Micha]

Thank u :)

[Rose Black]

You are most wellcome ;-)

[Mercy Fae]

Simple, yet complex at the same time. A subject matter with infinite possibilities, constricted into one simple poem. Amazing.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Hikari. So glad you liked it. :)

[lissalovesyou]

Yes, aren't we all? I like the way you "twisted" your words to make them fit into a "twisted" pattern.
lissaisjustalittletwisted:)

[Chris Micha]

Haha well thank you Lisa :)

[MsJewel]

Aren't we all twisted...just a little bit? Love this one my friend!

:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Some of us more than others :) thanks Julie!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Cute! I like the simplicity and the subject matter--being a bit twisted, after all!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

You twisted my brains my friend...lol...Just kidding
A clever and powerful write...:)...............

[Chris Micha]

Haha you can admit it ;) thanks my dear friend!

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)................

[s y e]

Ha, coming from the guy who wrote the twisted poem on the Voodoo Lady!!! ;) This made me larrrf. I must admit, I do have a twisted mind too sometimes... only sometimes.... /whispers/ she means most of the times. /laughs/

Nice one!

[Chris Micha]

I have a very rational calm mind spank you very much!!

[s y e]

"spank" I think you meant "thank" ;)

[Chris Micha]

Oh yeah! That's what I meant :)

[s y e]

LMAO! ;) Had me laughing. ROFL!

[melissa]

This is a great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks Melissa :)

[melissa]

You're welcome

[just Penny]

I think twisted is a creative place to be ! I like everything about this, apart from the final stanza, which I think could be omitted. Great to see you experimenting with different forms :) Penny

[Chris Micha]

There she is! Good suggestion and it's been omitted. ;)