T-W-I-S-T-E-D

We're all just mildly twisted!! Okay maybe severely!

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A twisted mind

With twisted images

Twists a pen

Forming twisted words

Into twisted verse

Causing twisted thoughts

To twist out of control.

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Reviews

[NoelHC]

I often see reviewers on here that do not like the use of repetition, however there are cases when repetition is extremely effective. This short poem is on of those cases, it make your point so well.

Another great piece of writing, the way you introduced it with
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was a brilliant touch.

[Chris Micha]

Noel, thank you for that awesome review sir!! It truly means a lot. :)

[NoelHC]

Damn, the formatting didn't keep TWISTED at an angle in my comment. And my sentence should have read "This short poem is onE of those cases"

[Chris Micha]

Well I certainly got it! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Nice play on words! :)

Some thoughts aren't meant to be controlled....
It's not so bad to be twisted. ;)

[Chris Micha]

Ha you're so right. I love being twisted! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

are you twisted??!

Don't tell anyone, but so am I, (only on a full moon) ;P

[Chris Micha]

Right! I have a feeling it's not just on a full moon. ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

oh, just ask my friends... We like to have a bonfire and howl at the moon...
other than that, I'm normal... really. ;D

[Chris Micha]

;) I believe you :P

[star73]

ha ha! that made me smile~) i needed that!

[Chris Micha]

Awesome!! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

My reviews are more flippant than twisted

[Chris Micha]

Sir, it's okay to embrace the twist!

[Bowers]

this is incredible, very intriguing... a chilling piece, with a vast imagination peeking through... great write, my friend!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you ma'am. Good to hear from you! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Need to be a bit twisted today to survive. Nice use of words. You made your point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Micha]

Wow thank you!! I am honored Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Was my pleasure to read your words.

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

I felt you could continue with this. But I liked it a lot :) Great poem.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much Taylor :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

NP :) My Pleasure

[Madalyn Beck]

I really enjoyed this one and definitely agree with KL's comment of Korn's Twisted Transistor. Great work! (:

[Chris Micha]

Cool! Thank you Madalyn :)

[Ruth]

Nice word play here, liked it a lot :) x

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Poppy I really appreciate it :)

[Anita Singh]

Oh my! That's vicious and i love it. :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Annabella!! :)

[Anita Singh]

You are welcome, Christian. :)