T-W-I-S-T-E-D

We're all just mildly twisted!! Okay maybe severely!

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A twisted mind

With twisted images

Twists a pen

Forming twisted words

Into twisted verse

Causing twisted thoughts

To twist out of control.

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Reviews

[NoelHC]

I often see reviewers on here that do not like the use of repetition, however there are cases when repetition is extremely effective. This short poem is on of those cases, it make your point so well.

Another great piece of writing, the way you introduced it with
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was a brilliant touch.

[Chris Micha]

Noel, thank you for that awesome review sir!! It truly means a lot. :)

[NoelHC]

Damn, the formatting didn't keep TWISTED at an angle in my comment. And my sentence should have read "This short poem is onE of those cases"

[Chris Micha]

Well I certainly got it! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Short, sweet and twisted

Some of us are more twisted than others :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is definitely one of my favorites from you. I'm sure almost every writer can relate to it.

[I Am Svetlana]

The use of the word 'twisted' in each sentence makes this piece stronger, more powerful. We are all crazy in our own unique way, though many around us wouldn't possibly understand. Then again, who would want to be normal like everyone else?

[kublakhan27]

Haha Welcome to poetry my friend...very witty and creative, and oh, I relate to it too :)

[Chris Micha]

Isn't it fun..haha! Glad you liked it my friend. :)

[Latifa]

I like it , inventive writing.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much! :)

[OrangeSlice]

I love the way it opens up and twists as if revealing the rest of the poem. I really love this poem it's moving makes me motivated to write more

[Chris Micha]

Hey there! Thank you so much for those words! Now go forth and write the twisted! :)

[Chris Micha]

Twisted uncomplicated real... it's to me. :-) as I love to say that, as a quote of my own. There is much so twisted in this world, but when written so right, it becomes real. Another great juggle of words my friend.

- Elisa

[Chris Micha]

I love your "quotes" especially the dark n' twisted ones ;)

Hehe.... thank you, I should make more of them maybe soon ;) I enjoyed this one to the bones... it resonated with me. ;)

[Chris Micha]

Well you let me know and I'll be the first in line

That's a deal ;-) I will :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

Very nice and loved your wit with how you used the word. Xo Winter

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Winter! Always a pleasure :)