The Epic Journey of All Things

Everything has a journey and a story. A beginning and an end.

"The Epic Journey of All Things"

By...Christian Gallagher

In the beginning...

...the ending begins

For all things

In between

Is the evolution

In the character
Of the soul

 

Within it

Exists a story

Untold

Longing

To be read

 

Its pages

Written...

In pain

In love

With blood & tears

Deserves

To be spoken

 

Each a

Unique singularity

Its importance

Spread universally

Binding us together

 

Everything shares

The pilgrimage

Of flesh

And dust

Of life

And death

 

As we join in...

 

The epic journey of all things.

"

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Some life journeys burn bright like giant meteors flying past a super nova . Others are more of a hungover stroll to 7/11 for beer and lotto tickets. Which one we take ain't necessarily up to us save the decisions we make at ppivotal moments in life that we didn't realize were all that important. Kinda like playing with Legos with your eyes closed, when you finally open them you look at your creation and think "what in the hell is that? "

[Chris Micha]

Bro, those words hit deep. I'm really honored to see your insite.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The poem could be about the signification of our existence and purpose and our efforts to leave a lasting legacy that new generations could use to bring us back as history repeats itself.

[Chris Micha]

Very good view, I like it! Thank you :)

[A. Amos]

Now this is such a thought provoking piece of art, you have not only share your soul in this piece; same time try to spread awareness about the value of life. Simply one great read...

[Chris Micha]

Thank you for your amazing review, Amos. It's an honor to hear that my friend!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome buddy

[Brittany Zedalis]

This poem is very thought-provoking for me. An epic journey indeed. Great work!

[Chris Micha]

Then I have done my job! Thank you my friend. :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

You're welcome :]

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A relative and guiding piece that grabs one forcefully, well done.

[Chris Micha]

Many thanks, Thomas. I appreciate it so much. :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow. Beautiful write, Christian. You have a way with words, my friend! This write, in and of itself, was an epic journey! Thank you for sharing this! Love this write! (:

[Chris Micha]

Awesome Madalyn, so glad you like it. Thank you my friend. :)

[Jen Yarrington]

So simple, yet so profound. Your first line really captured my imagination:

"In the beginning...
...the ending begins"

One small note: when you're using "its" as a possessive, it doesn't require an apostrophe. One of the annoying exception to the rule in English!

I really enjoyed this, thank you!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much for the review Jen. Always happy for the advice. :)

[Brook]

Great write, I really enjoyed it! Good job.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Brook!! I really appreciate it. :)

[maria ( rose)]

The epic of all things.
I thought this piece was well thought out and has a good show of explanation.
thank you for the share..maria rose

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much for your review, Maria. I appteciate it. :)

[maria ( rose)]

your so welcome!!:))

[MsJewel]

I love the structure and the flow of this well written poem. Great message as well.

:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Julie. So glad you like it. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Linked universally
Through all things

Everything shares
A journey"

A great poem and message with those lines. Some truthful words in the author's notes too. Excellent...:)..........

[Chris Micha]

My friend I'm honored, as always. Especially coming from a writer of your caliber. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I'm honored to read great works...You are welcome...:).....................