Creature of the Night

She always gets what she wants.

Creature of the Night

 

Her silouette was outlined by the silver light,

 

coming from the peeping eyes of the Harvest Moon,

 

through the white-silk drapes hung from an open window,

 

allowing a cool-stiff breeze to caress her warm inviting body,

 

as it animated the see through satin night-gown,

 

like wings of an angel in flight,

 

revealing the curvaceous matrix of her hips and thighs,

 

wrapped in the glow of porcelain erotic skin,

 

releasing the blossoming pheromones of her rapture,

 

leading me from the safe-haven of my bed,

 

into the arms of an alluring-ravishing creature of the night.

Author's Note

Haven't had a chance to format it yet. Image from Google images.

Reviews

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Wow. I really like the flow and pace of this piece. Its like you eased me into it at the beginning then bam, you ended it with an explosion.

"revealing the curvaceous matrix of her hips and thighs,
wrapped in the glow of porcelain erotic skin,
releasing the blossoming pheromones of her rapture,
leading me from the safe-haven of my bed,
into the arms of an alluring-ravishing creature of the night."

Such an awesome play and use of words. Love it!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Natalie. I took a page out of your book, as you can see ha. ;)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Hahaha, yes I see that. Please feel free to take more pages :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

through the white-silk drapes hung from an open window,
allowing a cool-stiff breeze to caress her warm inviting body

The imagery in this poem is astounding. Marvelous work!! ^-^

[Chris Micha]

So honored coming from a great poet as yourself. Thank you!

[Brittany Zedalis]

Awe, thank you! You are very welcome!

[Aethereal]

A beautiful description of an erotic event. It reads like a page in a romance novel. This must go on for a hundred more pages. I'll be waiting for the novel to be published.

[Chris Micha]

I'm truly honored that you liked it that much! It means so much. :)

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[Baby Ricochet]

Hey I went out with her. I think her name was Shaneka

[Chris Micha]

Lmao! She's something else, bro. Haha

[Woody]

humm.. hot night ahead. elegant choice of words as usual that leave very little to the imagination.

[Chris Micha]

Haha this is true. ;) Thank you my friend!

[Glass Heart Inc]

This left me wanting to know what happens next. I really liked the words you chose to describe her.

[Chris Micha]

But that's where imagination takes over. ;) Thank you! I honestly thought about writing more, maybe later.

[Madalyn Beck]

Sounds like it would be a good night! Hahaha! I really enjoyed the allure of this write. Truly captivating. Excellent job with this! (:

[Chris Micha]

Mmmhmmm...lol. Thanks sweet, Madalyn! ;)

[Cory Barrett]

A splash of eroticism, sounds like a wonderful night.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you! I think it would be a fun night too.

[melissa]

This is an awesome poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much, Melissa! :)

[melissa]

Your welcome