Mi Amore!

A crazed on-line secret admirer.

A shadow
admires from afar
A black widow
spins a digital web
A mind
born of the dark
The voices
speak in the red

A flame
burning in silence, echoes
Tidal waves
reaching for wanting shores
The cries
coming from a heart-stringed cello
Her voices
whisper, "Mi amore!"

Reviews

[just Penny]

Creeped me out and definitely sent shivers down my spine. An all-too-real situation for many. Hope it's not actually happening to you :( Long distant love relationships are highly dodgy and you never quite know who they are as they present an image you want to see. In everyone I believe there is a balance of dark and light and without dark, we cannot see or appreciate light. The question for me is what's the trigger to send someone over the edge? Excellent writing and a convincing scenario that I don't ever wish to know ! Penny

[Chris Micha]

Well it's not happening now, but it did happen. Psycho comes to mind. I mean I like a woman with a dark mind lol, but not like this. I appreciate your words, beautiful. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Interesting imagery in this one. Good Job.......................

[Chris Micha]

I really appreciate it, boss. Thanks for stopping by!

[Madalyn Beck]

Yipes! Been there, done that! There are some crazy people out there. Great write! (:

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Madalyn :)

[Matilda]

Do I have it wrong or is this about being intensely in love? At least I thought it was very romantic, kind of intense (in a good way). Great work :)

[Chris Micha]

Love yes, intense yes, but not in a good way lol. It's more about a secret obsession, that's about to turn bad. I guess it can be romantic. ;)

[Margo Seuss]

Ooooooo, quite mysterious and romantic. I can see a mysterious (but deadly) woman approaching a regular sort of guy at a restaurant by the ocean and whispering this 'mi amore' into his ear. I'm guessing you were going for more of an innocent tender moment here though. It gave me chills! You know, I could also see this mysterious woman as being a ghost, whispering into her husband's ear!!! Haha!! Wonderful! My imaginative neurons have been stimulated!!!

[Chris Micha]

Haha well I'm glad I could help. This is about a crazy on-line crush that's about to go to far. I can see you have a vivid imagination, as myself. ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Another beaut from your romantic pen. Your tidal waves are overwhelming to her love...Bravo, sir...:).........

[Chris Micha]

Aww you're too kind, Sami. You need to publish a book soon, so I can buy it! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Thank you kindly. I appreciate you. Hopefully one day. For you it will be a gift...Take care...:)......