Tragedian

Life in tragedy.

What a sad movie

This turned out to be

The lead character

    Should have been played

By anyone other than me

    

Forgot my lines

Missed my mark

    

The casting director

Should be fired

     For giving me the part

Low budget

No director

It's not even being Filmed in Technicolor

Black & white  

No audience

The lack of talent Is evident

Stuck in a scene

Time forgot

Caught in a loop

The reel won't stop.

Reviews

[W. C. Forrest]

There are so many ways the poem can be interpreted. For me it was life stuck in a loop of forgotten existence. We mere actors learning our part and ironically life being the greatest teacher of life itself; she can definitely be a hard master. Illustriously penned.

[Chris Micha]

Amazing review, sir! You hit the nail on the head. Thank you, I'm honored.

[Shaquana Adams]

I really like the format and metaphor. Awesome poetry :)

-QuanaWana

[Madalyn Beck]

I absolutely loved this piece. Not only did I see this written from the perspective of an actor - I have previous work with acting - but also with the way of life. We are all given a role and sometimes we wonder why on earth we are in this particular "role". Truly an amazing write you have here! Fantastic write! (:

[Chris Micha]

Wow Madalyn, I am truly honored by your words. You have hit the nail on the head and described it perfectly. Thank you so much! :)

[Tina Louise UK]

Could relate to this one hun...well penned! :) x

[Chris Micha]

Thank you darlin' :)

[Latifa]

I love this piece Christian, it is so deep and the way you use to express your feelings in an implicit way is so clever.

[Chris Micha]

Latifa, that really means alot and I thank you!

[Brittany Zedalis]

I like the format and it's rather creative. Bravo!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Brittany :)

[Baby Ricochet]

In life I like to star in porn

[Chris Micha]

Lmao that's awesome!!!

[Tinkerbellje]

I had the same idea as Eeshan. We certainly don't have a script for life, we just adlib along the way. Great poem!

[Chris Micha]

Very true statement, ma'am. Thank you :)

[just Penny]

The format and style works well with the theme. "Stuck in a scene time forgot" is the true tragedy for me, with no second take :( I enjoyed reading this, it's creative and original.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you, Penny! We just need to re-write our script ;)

[Angels heart]

Wow, no offense, but that play probably sucked, but you tried your best, :) that's all that matters