Wrapped In The Night

The ebb & flow of two bodies in the night.

"Wrapped In The Night"

Here we are

wrapped in the Night

Two vulnerable naked souls

composing into a harmonious sweet symphony

Silence, allows your heart to say everything

The flutters, skips, and thumps guide my every move

Magical slight of hands

makes the world disappear

Allowing us to create our own

Fiery velvet kisses

romance cool bare skin

Passion ignites the air

engulfing our bodies in invisble flames

Feverish movements carving art in time

My fingers record the contours of your body

playing back vivid images in my mind

Quiet rose colored cheeks

frantically breathing waves of desire

The Night watches in curious awe

while keeping the Light in the dark

Nothing exists in this moment but you

Tonight, I surrender it all

Tightly wrapped in the Night

I surrender it all.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

Tonight, I surrender it all

Tightly wrapped in the Night

I surrender it all.

I'm glad I read this poem. It's so passionate and so well written. It's one of my favorites by you!
-QuanaWana

[Brianna Brie]

This is so serene that it makes me envision love as opposed to lust. It just feels so gentle and true. Great title, too. Thanks for sharing.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my beautiful dear poet! :)

[MagicAl]

I'm glad I've just stumbled across this! Another passionate write..full of lust and sensuality. Really enjoyed this again.. :)

[Chris Micha]

Awe that is so awesome to hear! Thank you my friend!!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wheew it just got hot in here lol that was one dark erotically sensual ride I really loved this one

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you sweetie. Only the night knows ;)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I added it to my faves

[Chris Micha]

I'm honored!!

[kublakhan27]

Silence, allows your heart to say everything...Iove that couplet...it almost acts as a thesis for the entire piece. There are few voices to be found in this piece...it's all about kisses and touches, flutters, skips, and thumps. When you're with the right partner, words aren't necessary, and it's all in the body language. I love how you've presented this frame of mind in your words. Gorgeous work Christian, I enjoyed this one very much.

[Chris Micha]

Wow! I am so honored by your words and so happy you enjoyed it! Thank you so much. :)

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure :)

[Baby Ricochet]

A nice poem. So my mind hasn't been warped by degenerate verse,

[Chris Micha]

Much appreciated, sir! That is a great compliment, I'm honored.

[Jen Yarrington]

Oh, the early days of love and passion - that's what this poem brings to my mind. After 17 years of marriage, sometimes we forget the early days....

[Chris Micha]

I agree! It's ashame it happens, but doesn't mean it can't change. :)

[just Penny]

Sensual, seductive and romantic. A delightful poem that's well written. But, for me, the lines :
"Magical slight of hands
makes the world disappear
Allowing us to create our own"
could be a poem in themselves ! :)

[Chris Micha]

Wow thank you so much. I'm really glad you like it. :)

[Angels heart]

Wow, after I read this my face was red. This is going to sound weird but, it sounded like this poem was doing IT to me. Gentle yet wanting. I can feel it, like its inside of my body, nice peice.

[Chris Micha]

Ha my face is red ;) thanks angel

[Angels heart]

No prob, anything for you, babe ;)