Love at first sight

The description is pretty much what the title says. Love at first sight.

There she was, standing across the room,

My feelings for her were in full bloom,

She was beautiful as a red rose,

With a smile that took my woes

I wanted so badly to know,

If she was the one I would grow

To love from the bottom of my heart,

And hopefully we would never to part

If only I could ask her name,

It was always such a shame,

That I could never find a word,

That wouldn’t make me sound like a nerd

My feelings for her were running deep,

I didn’t want to come off as a creep,

But if I didn’t dare,

She wouldn’t know I care

Now she is walking towards me,

I really hoped that she would see

A way to see thru my heart,

And never tear it apart

What’s that, she stops and says my name,

I felt so perfectly ready to proclaim

That she was now in my soul,

I think she wants to take a stroll

Now she’s in my arms,

She was definitely falling for my charms

I never knew that love,

Could fit so perfect as a glove

Now I have her near,

It seems so perfectly clear,

That the love of my life,

Would soon become my wife.

Author's Note

Just having a little fun. Nothing special.

Reviews

[Coffee Vampier]

"I never knew that love,
Could fit so perfect as a glove"

Very cute.

Well written, I like to see the personality behind the poetry as well.

[Chris A Jones]

Thank you, and thanks for taking the time to read it.

[Coffee Vampier]

Anytime. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. This was a really a heart touching love story. I liked the way you have described and the end was very amazing. Truly well written.

[Chris A Jones]

Thank you! I appreciate the review. Thank you for taking time to read my poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

No need of thanks. ☺

[Valentine]

Nicely rhymed and written. Valentine

[Chris A Jones]

Thank you. And thank you for stopping by.

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's charming and mesmerizing...
I like the rhymes and words put in here making the story within the poem sound euphonious.....
good job again..

[Chris A Jones]

Thank you. Appreciate the review and taking the time to read the piece.

[Anindita Janhabee]

My pleasure...

[slfisher89]

Rather sweet and the self doubt of the speaker relatable.

[Chris A Jones]

Thank you. I believe a lot of us can probably relate. It definitely is me for sure.