Loving you was all I ever knew

Trying something knew. Maybe not the most elegant.

When all I remember, is loving you,

Our life was together, now it is no more

What once was so special, is lost forever,

You took the best part of my heart,

And gone forever, my life is incomplete

Because loving you, was all I ever knew

 

I just can’t accept that our love is no more,

What we had together was forever,

Now we’re apart, you’ve left me behind

You took the best part of my heart,

And gone forever, my life is incomplete

Because loving you, was all I ever knew

 

My life is incomplete, without you by my side

The life that we shared, is so very hard to hide,

I will always love you, no matter what you do

Because loving you, was all I ever knew

 

Now we’ve gone our separate ways,

My life will never be the same again

The love that we had is gone

You took the best part of my heart,

And gone forever, my life is incomplete

Because loving you, was all I ever knew

 

I thought that we had a special bond

My life will keep on going on

Now that we have grown apart

You took the best part of my heart,

And gone forever, my life is incomplete

Because loving you, was all I ever knew

 

My life is incomplete, without you by my side

The life that we shared, is so very hard to hide,

I will always love you, no matter what you do

Because loving you, was all I ever knew

Author's Note

Nothing special. Just trying my had at something a little different.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Some times expressing ones own feelings gives the heart a break. Valentine

[Chris A Jones]

Thank you!

[Kathleen Montgomery]

So sad but That is the way things happen to often

[Chris A Jones]

Thanks for taking the time to read the piece.

[Jenny]

the last two stanzas were my favorite! thanks for sharing your lovely work ;)

[Chris A Jones]

You are welcome and thank you for taking the time to read it.

[Jenny]

Anytime ;)

[Anindita Janhabee]

And taking away a part of my heart through this poem, you made a great job regarding feeling of love...
I could relate and I can say this is one of the best love poems I've ever read...
thanks a lot for sharing....
i am glad that I came across this piece...
Anindita

[Chris A Jones]

Thank you. I am glad you liked the piece, and I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

[Anindita Janhabee]

my pleasure Sir..

[Anindita Janhabee]

my pleasure Sir..

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes the hardest thing to do is to move on. But usually, once we do, there are better things around the corner.

[Chris A Jones]

Indeed! Thanks for taking the time to read the work.

[Kathleen Montgomery]

So true - sometimes people think on relationships with people after the possibilities of being hopeful have passed - as long as people don't let love without hope take part of themselves then a person can go back to fulfilling - working towards their dreams.

[wordman]

i liked it very much,love gone bad !
love poetry is always a great seller

[Chris A Jones]

Silly as it may sound, I started hearing a tune in my head as I wrote these words. Sometimes I really wish I could write music. Maybe one day.

[Chris A Jones]

Thanks for giving it a read.

[wordman]

my pleasure