More than it hurts

This story is about a model named Bridget Mansfield and specifically this chapter is about recently Bridget found out her mother was in the hospital and turned to a quote and got more than she planned

WORDS OF A CHAMPION

All great achievements require time-Maya Angelou. I read these words over and over again. I realized my life requires this message. “Hey what you doing”, an unfamiliar voice called out across the apartment pool area. I turned to see the new girl Layson walking over. Her hair blowing in the wind and her dress long and beautiful. “Awe nothing much just reading this quote by Maya Angelou”, I say still looking at the quote.” That’s my inspiration quote too”, she said laughing. I joined in the laughter.” Hey Layson what happened on the boat back there I am sorry. I know a whole bunch of girls hate on you” .I say sorry once again “Hey don’t worry about it I know I was the new girl and hey I had it coming walking on that boat looking good,” she laughs and ties her hair into a ponytail .” Oh and Bridget I am sorry about your mom”, she walks away and disappears into the sunset. I walked back to my room. I walked in on Aubrey and some man. ”Oh s**t “, that’s all I could say. I gave it a second look.”Christian is that you”, I said laughing and closing my eyes so I wouldn’t see his goods. ”Yea”, he said in guilt because he knew he was caught. I walked out and went to go check on Charisma. I saw her in the kitchen eating everything. Cookies with whip cream, strawberries, extra chocolate, and to wash it down she had a full glass of milk.” Can’t you eat little gurl”, Zanae walking in bringing some dirty dishes into the kitchen. I walk over and grab a strawberry and went into my room to call Ja’Quentin. I dial he’s number and I hear the dial tone. He’s dial tone turns me on which is so weird to me. “Hello”, he says in a beautiful deep voice. Kind of like when he sounds when he wakes up.” Hey baby were you sleep”, I say finishing my strawberry. “Yea how you know”, he says. “Well because of your voice”, I say.” My voice”, he says like I am crazy. I tell him when he wakes up he’s voice is raspy and I think it is sexy. I really wanted to see Quentin so I told him I‘ll be there in a few hours. When I arrived at Quentin’s apartment he was only wearing boxers. He was really in the mood. We tired to talk and see how things were going but all we could think about was sex. “So how are your classes”? We talked for hours me and him we were not going to be intimate that night to much to talk about plus it was that time of the month. I went back home and my girls and my sis wanted to know all the juicy details. But I don’t kiss and tell plus we didn’t do anything anyway. There was a knock at the door. Layson was crying and was looking awful. Her beautiful dress I had seen earlier was now torn and ripped. Her makeup ruined and her jewelry all gone. ”Oh my God what happened”, Zanae ran and helped me get her to the couch.” Aye Lil one get her some water”, I said. Layson explained some men mugged her and tired to rape her. But before they could even lift her dress she kicked and screamed and was lucky enough to get away. After that horrible accident we all moved.

Author's Note

enjoy!!! some errors may occur

Reviews

[Ashley.M.E]

It's a nice story, My first thing Is when a new person talked you should make a new paragraph, but that's a minor thing that can easily be fixed. Also a little more description on some of the people would also be helpful in picturing looks, against that's not really that needed. It's a little fast, you don't take time to explain much, I mean. You jump from one event to another with little though. It's a good short story all togeither, not my type of write, but that doesn't matter.