It's All So Shiny

Another random one, let me know your interpretation

Wander, aimlessly
Here I am
Grab it, restlessly
Check the tags

 

One row, next row
Swear it's fun
Click here, Clang there
One by one

 

KEEPMEHAPPYKEEPMEHAPPY

 

Try on, Yank off
Look in the mirror
Strike a pose, blame the clothes
My whole life is filler

 

IAMHAPPYIAMHAPPY
NOI'MNOTNOI'MNOT

 

Year come, year gone
They always fitted well
Coffin open, coffin close
Will I need these in hell?

 

SWEARIT'SFUNSWEARIT'SFUN
FUCKIT'SNOTFUCKIT'SNOT

 

In the coffin, make me hot
Heavenly sex appeal
Dig the hole, pile the dirt
Worms need a hot meal

Reviews

[r]

Wow this is amazing. I love the imagery and the humor and the way you wrote it.

[Miss Coral]

Love the dark humor and imagery. Overall, great write.

-Coral-

kind of reminds me of pretending to be someone you're not.

[Eric Cox]

Dark ending! This is cool. Cool touch of humor. Love the lines in capitols, things seem or look fun but when we really think or experience: no. Nicely done.

[Leanne Conway]

Damn, That's all I got to say. O_O

It's a great poem =D now that I know why you wrote it.