obviously

For a contest.

someone told me

that money isn’t as great

as people think,

and i think they’re right because

green pieces of paper

will never taste as good as

red, shiny lollipops.

-CV

Reviews

[wolfshrew]

i could go for a lolly pop

[Jessica M.]

Ironic and sweet.
Very enjoyable.

[Anita B Jacques]

Very sweeeet, thank you, I needed that, reviewed too many sad poems lately.

[Shelby Baker]

Lol I like! super cute!

[Sabine]

The poem declares the obvious as honest. Witty and likeable. Sabine

[Not Mistaken]

*rolls on floor and laughs out loud*
I'll never forget this poem.

[Not Mistaken]

*rolls on floor and laughs out loud*
I'll never forget this poem.

[Not Mistaken]

*rolls on floor and laughs out loud*
I'll never forget this poem.

[Lauren Beth]

Very funny, cute. Brought a smile to my face :) Nice little poem!

[Six Impossible Things]

amen to that. funny how the simplest things hit the hardest.