conscious

half-awake or half-asleep,

which commitment shall i keep?

i could crash, and go so deep,

i might not make it back,

 

or i could ride this manic wave,

and see whose soul that i might save,

poetic roads that i could pave,

to keep my mind on track,

 

it seems it's time to make a choice,

to close my eyes or raise my voice,

and find a reason to rejoice,

before my screen goes black.

-CV

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[A Touch of Insanity:)]

I really like your poem, I'm just not sure about the last line...