Coma

travel through to astral waves
to a place so far
so far away
from all the noises i think i hear
from those who know only jealousy and hatred
i can't stand to watch these fakes all around me
burning blame
violent flames
the people

 who run about in fear
constantly
mongering
conversing
reversing
so dry
like spells
sentenced
to definition of
this feeling I want to say

'I am not scared of you
unspoken beauty
 one
undefined'

for i am your cure, your solution
i am not afraid to touch you, or to love you
i like to think i am not like them
or show that i do
or know that we were
know that we are
 meant to be together
because it's true,

bird of blood feather.
our forlorn love
i am so desperate to attain
something i have stopped in my brain
it is
something clogging the gears of the
universe
something endearing
a fractal curse
frozen chaos
getting worse
can it be?

traverse
is it me?
folding
even inside myself
i stand
before
 a door
that refuses
to budge
to open
so wide as
it must contain
the secret

May

Author's Note

not finished.. but here is the draft i guess.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

This is really good, love the imagery, it can be a little tighter, or shortened to give it a punch...or a different format for prose, but I enjoyed reading your lines.