Carnival

Affixed via covenant
how viscerally surreal
the sting of an others
consummate hypocrisy
left to those vague
in their fervid query
seeking out weakness
we're all remaining as
thieves, though we are
indirect magnanimous
animus of dissension
my lamenting sorrows
anguish' filial mentioned
found in the sly demurs
i cannot tell them their truth is
 vainglorious
no point for
 arguments
for intention defines you
describes you as
allowance only to sustain
your feeblest facades
your high mares
a marrow gist
surrounded by a hollowed core
your fake prophets scavenging
so gluttonous for temporary
the comfort being eaten away
attempted ethereal drain
clinging to reason to remain
and by just that..
it only seems

"..i have been defeated."

no more

ungracious
those who refuse to shed
a tear
"never me" so alas
they could never understand
the authenticity of our mystic fire
fueling my unavoidably compulsory desire
feuding
yearning to find my deepest inspiration
my travel across the yielding adamantine
present is constantly new, a rare existence

dwelling within my vespertine
reality

now
shifting
marveling
dripping
the center
even attention unravels
for i cannot be entombed

magnetic distortion
trips through polarity a
differences attraction

the rift necessary for hiatus
stare through
the ambiguous vacillation
though refuse nothing
valiant ambivalence
existence of and in
tactical tenure

eviscerating the invalid theories
forgotten remembrance
resembling true destiny
clarity of clairvoyance
all the wants of flesh
infecting me so well
made to combine and to thresh
inevitability sometimes to create
hate
furiously
they call me
cruel
for now
misunderstood
from all angles
all different sides
reflecting
what is your wish
crystalline
 
through dishonor
discrimination
torture fulfilled
and admiration
accommodation
and of separation
sought out desperation
that you will not recover

apotheosis'

redemption
in us sharing

a connection is
magnificence
of such glory

is truth?
no matter

i am . growing
hidden whole
a hole

will
breathe
destiny
 
to escape
the soft whine
of the world winding
aesthetically pleasing
synthetically relieving
feeling so good
while still so low
our stunned hearts in awe
unbelievable how possible

this heart is still pounding 
selection is power
the mystery of
seduction
choice

"Carpe Diem"

we will not be punished

how obscure
a sense of curiosity seeks
more
pleasure
emptiness
found within
vivacious
lust
so carnal
knowledge

all these things

we don't need

yet feel
 we cannot live
without them
as they cannot
without
us

ravage this world
and still we feel our conscious grow
into convergence

each and every day

we wake up
alone
mind and body
searching for
our agent
we never knew

Author's Note

Ashes- your writing style truly inspires me. As you can see. I chose your style for this one if you don't mind. Also added a Jrock song!

Everyone else should check out Ashes_Twisted page! :)

Reviews

[Theartofburning]

Your lines are like cocaine,
people should be sniffing them.

This was amazing,
and to find one of my favorite Jrock bands at the bottom..
I am speechless..
Thank you so very much,
and to know that I inspire you..
Man, what a rush I feel inside.
You are truly a masterpiece.

[night/light]

You're support is like cocaine. Being the first to truly ever even comment on one of my writings, you are a big inspiration for me, because impressing you is truly a grand feeling; you deserve it.