How I feel sometimes :) Loveish

enjoy, its just the start of one of my songs that sounded good as a poem I guess :)

When I saw your face,

It gave me wings,

I couldn't embrace,

Every word you sing,

When I go to sleep,

All I dream,

Is you kissin me deep,

Even though it seems,

I don't appreciate it,

But I sure do,

No matter what,

I love you :)

Reviews

[A. M. DeGolier]

Love it!

[Requiem for a dream]

It's small wonderful piece.
it flows easily and i love it