Death's InspirationA Story by NoemiWhat do you think an experience in the face of death would be like? this how I'd like for it to go. I'm lying here, floating, in a sheet of white nothingness; but still able to hear the distant traffic. The annoying blurred whispers and shouts of people nearby. What are they saying? I try to focus on one voice, but I still cannot make sense of their words. Speak louder. Clearer. I try to shout out, to communicate to those voices.Why aren't they listening to me? I Try calling again but my body is heavy, far too heavy. However it's warm, and a soft blanket of unwillingness makes it too comfortable to move. I still try though, just a little, to move my fingers. They're heavy, as if a thousand delicate strands of string were woven to the tips, rooting them to the ground. But as time passes they become cold. So are my toes. The cold- it's spreading, from my legs, through my arms, my torso. Until the cold comes to rest at my heart, one last beat of warmth, until my entire body is cold, and a figure appears. He- or what I think is a he, seems familiar. Without a face, no proper clothing but a cloak of shadow to cover himself. I don't know who this is, or what my relations are, but he is important, He is intense. Leaning close- still no eyes, mouth, no shape to identify as a nose. Nothing good can come from knowing this thing. Leave me, I try to speak, but my lips won't form the words. Not yet, it replies, cold and uninterested in my condition. I want to paint you, and your cloak. I whisper in what I know is my last breath, my last bold move to reach out to this wisp of a ghost. "I have no cloak" are the last words I hear from this figure, This parting gift it left me, Words for me to paint a picture, at wherever I'm going next.
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Added on February 6, 2016Last Updated on July 3, 2017 AuthorNoemiAboutI am very passionate about how I express myself, and although my writing may be dark, I have a positive outlook on life. more..Writing
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