I'm sane you know

 

Gripping to agony, afraid to feel pain.

Don’t touch me, don’t touch me.

I’m fine, you know.

 

You see I’m intact.

Breathing, bleeding, human alive.

I’m fine, you know.

 

Look me in the eyes.

Say to me that you love me.

This is all I need.

 

Touching joy, with my fingertips.

I feel it, I feel it.

I’m sane, you know.

 

Don’t ask me if things are

Ok, alright, finding balance.

I’m sane, you know.

 

Hold me from my frame.

Say to me that you’re fine.

This is all I need.

 

Moving to equilibrium, ready to be free.

I beg you, I beg you.

I need you here, you know.

 

Don’t ask me to move

From agony, from joy, from free.

I need you here, you know.

 

Come with me.

Say to me that you will stay.

This is all I need.

Reviews

[Wharton]

Feels like the final moments of a relationship. The break up has happened, he's asking if she is okay. She is, understandably irrational, trying to convince him and more so, herself that all will be fine. And yes, while he's there, she takes a stab at asking him to stay. A frantic, almost begging tone. At least that is how I see it. I don't think I toss out superlatives undeservedly, but this was a well-conceived poem and a pleasure to read.

[Zak]

Wow! Your poem has a lot of life truth to it. XD Its like you know you are sane, and you want people to know that you are here. Very powerful. :)

[shinybluestars03]

Awesome poem i really enjoyed it!
I like the style and flow.
My favorite lines are:

Don't ask me to move/From agony, from joy, from free.
I need you here, you know./Come with me.
Say to me that you will stay./This is all I need.

Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

[bluessadmood]

Oh another loveliness,you are special ..really
Gripping agony,still afraid to feel all the pain
Dont touch me..I ll be fine,you see i am intact
Breathing bleeding alive,look in my eyes
Say all the love to me,this is my need
Touching joy with finger tips,I feel it,I feel it
Dont ask me why if things are alright
finding balance,for i am sane you know
Hold my frame,tell me you are fine
Its what i need to hear,stable now
ready to be free,i need you here you know
Come to me say you will stay
Its I need to hear..
what loveliness,what magic..
lovely write..