3 Benches

a Poem

3 benches from me a man sleeps
Is he homeless?
Or is he dreading of losing love like I am?
Is he tearing from the emptiness the future holds?
Like I am.
Just 3 benches from me a man sleeps
Is he tired of fighting for life?
Or tired of fighting for love?
Like I am
Is his armor in his bag? which lays, by his head
Or is it getting soft from the tears
Like mine is
3 benches from that man sleeping
Will be another man sleeping.

Author's Note

There was actually a man sleeping 3 benches from, so it is a true story

Reviews

[Truth the Liar]

Thanx everyone, appreciate your opinions

[munkiC munkiDU]

Nice poem : )
I like how you used a simple and unassuming situation, to create something so personal to yourself. Great job ^.^

[Ashley June Canfield]

I really enjoyed reading this.

[Chelsea]

I like it :D can't wait until you write more :)

[Meadow Rayne]

Wow... This is a great poem! looking forward to reading more from you in the future.