Don't Love Me

Don't Love Me

A Poem by Sleepless
"

still bored.

"

Hang on to my arm

I'll spin you around in circles, take you for the ride of your life.

Embrace me, kiss me, protect me from harm.

We'll make love in the night, just to pass the time.

We don't have to buy in, we can pretend.

Let's take this wave, jump on this train

Travel around the world together

Breathe the salty air, taste freedom in the warm rain.

This Earth's too small, take me across the universe

I'll sing you another verse of your favorite song.

Out plans are well rehearsed

Nothing will go wrong

Just don't let yourself fall in love.

We don't have to buy in, it's all deception

Nothing's as good they say.

Don't love me.

Don't fall for me.

We can stay this way forever

Free but still together.

This way is so much better.

© 2009 Sleepless


Author's Note

Sleepless
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This was so nice ..ha ha,I like you when you are bored
hang on to me ,spin me i will take you for a ride
embrace me kiss me we ll make love tonight
Lets take the wave,jump on the train
we ll go round the world..I will sing your favorite song
I have it all rehearsed nothing will go wrong,just dont fall in love with me
we will stay this way forever,free and together
I really loved this..so much deep feelings and insight behind this
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is interesting. In my time I've read hundreds of poems about love but I dare say this is the first time I've read one that didn't want that deep level of commitment. It's quite intriguing because of that. It's an equally interesting contrast, the romantic tone with a non-romance subject. I tip my hat to you (well I'm an Emu it appears so I don't have a hat, lol) for not just following that same old route. Line eleven, "our?"

It's a well written, honest poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


VERY interesting and sincere portrayal of a way of life, a path of dreams....very well-crafted phrases, smooth and lovely

Posted 15 Years Ago



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