Day After Day

A poem about suicide I wrote for a contest, but I'd still like critique and reviews. <3

Day after day
And hour after hour
I hear their voices
It turns me sour.
Throw the paper at my head.
Stick the gum within my hair.
Go ahead, I don't mind.
You'll be who I think of when I die.
One day too many
Go home quick.
Write the note, make it stick.
Pray a prayer, and hold on tight.
I won't see the morning light.
Find the rope, and hang me up.
No surprise, you don't show up.
Mother, Father, please don't cry.
I am now where the angels fly.
Mother, Father, please don't worry.
Love doesn't matter when you die in a hurry.

Author's Note

Oh my goodness, I actually wrote a poem that almost rhymes.
edit: also fixed a silly typo. c;