Sweet Hawaiian Life...

These islands hold such mystery
More beauty than I could ever believe
Ride the blue waves across the sea
Sweet Hawaiian life

Captured by her ocean breeze
Clean salty air for the soul to breath
The sand and the surf and coconut trees
Sweet Hawaii life

This island paradise calls my name
Beckons me with her golden flame
No place on earth is quite the same
Sweet Hawaii life

Island music plays at night
Perfumed air, the stars shine bright
The edge of Heaven within sight
Sweet Hawaii life

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

It's grand to read your gentle phrases about such a magical place, its ancient history, culture and open welcome. Your fine poem offers delight and harmony. Thank you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've never been to Hawaii. Thank you for taking me there!

[Chris Shaw]

You create a wonderful ambience with your stanzas. Your lines flow, have great imagery and the repetition works well. An enjoyable read. Thank you.