The Winding Road

Can you see that winding road

thats oh so fair a way

oh an you see that winding road

will you walk or will you stay

for on that long and winding road

an old man you may meet

he might tell you of another road

on which another you may greet

Can you see the unbeaten path

over the hills and plains

oh can you see the unbeaten path

like natures lovely veins (need some help here any suggestions?)

and on that wild and unbeaten path

a home you just might find

and on that once unbeaten path

your heart will free your mind

Reviews

[sammyj]

I really like this

[Hailey]

wow this is great :D i love the imagery here and it flows great. as for that line, hmmmm..... maybe something about rain? Lanes? Pain? Trains? Something sane or insane? idk im just listing a bunch of things that rhyme XD good luck with that line!