fireflies

ok i promised a friend i would write something on the day nothing happened to me or others! today was that day!

 Fireflies way up high

is there a reason

for you to cry

at the end of the season?

 

Fireflies over here

no there

you will be back next year

but i wont stare

 

Fireflies in the dark

i see you flying

like a lark

While i am dying

In the dark

 

Fireflies way up high

there is no reason

for you to cry

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Interesting poem! I really liked it! The rhythm of the poem was unique, making the poem itself unique! The imagery was really good and I really liked the poem! :D

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

a nostalgic journey for me.. Fireflies or what we call junebugs in the south are amazing creatures.. A bittersweet look at summer's end.. But you're right.. there's no reason to cry... A summer breeze will come again bringing fireflies to illuminate the sky and take us out of the dark..
Kudos
GBU

[Cassandra D.]

This poem is very good, actually.
It's very cute and the imagery is awesome.

[TheActOfRandomness(:]

This poem is sooo cute!
I love it! :D

This is so light and airy! I really like it.

[Third Grace]

Interesting use of rhyme. The poem has an almost whimsical air about it. Short and easy to follow. I liked it.

[SilentDreamer]

Cute although you repeat certain words in an odd way. Such as "dark." Then again that's just the way I think. :D Otherwise however I really like this poem. It's beautiful. Great job.