Tonight

i was really bored and suddenly i fell out of my chair and somehow that gave me this poem :)

See it fall

Set it right

please be here

with me tonight

I see you laugh

i see you fight

i've even seen

you filled with fright

 

But you're not here

you're too far gone

and off the mirror

your picture falls

 

I see it fall

I make it right

but you're not here

with me tonight

Reviews

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Fall off your chair, sister... The 2nd verse is my fav...
I love short poems... They carry more punch sometimes
more often than elongated ones.
A brief thanx
GBU

[closed]

Denni, you're quite the poet...

You've impressed me.

This could be the start of a nice friendship ^

-Dream

[tamilynnyea;.]

I love.
Very intense passion brewing-like ^_^

[Avoiry]

Seems very passionate almost fierce as if it holds a bit of anger to it. I like the snap. Nice rhyme good read.

[StoryTailor]

You really do like rhymes don't you? It was nice.

[Nakami-sensei]

Wow! so much rhymes!