two lines of death

I see the sun on the morrow

we'll be dead before tommorow

Reviews

[Sheila Marie Carr]

We are born only to die, you said it in two lines which sums it up, great job.

[Patricia Goaga]

I like it very much. I think your minimalist approach is refreshing. Very clever and humorous.

[Cassandra D.]

This was very good for such short lines.
I also liked the rhyming of it.

[StoryTailor]

I've already told you my opinion on this. And all I can say is this... have you switched into my place?