Off To The Races

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Lips...full and plump, juicy, sensual, seductive and sweet, irresistible lips are my kryptonite, I mean if I knew her lips were poison I would gladly kiss her once and die happy. Let’s take a kiss as if it’s a race, the lips are the sports cars, silk and speedy and then the crash, having the lips bleed on each other, that is that desire I always feel. Hungrily, our tongues would move together and create their own language because ‘language is wine upon the lips.’ One thing I hate however is limitations, I believe that a kiss should be eternal, no less and no more however we should appreciate what comes before the lips. Her burning cheeks, her creased forehead and she moans and groans at my touch, the eyes shut �" not because the visual side of the kiss was revolting but because things could get wild, what they eyes want, they eyes will fight to get. The neck was of course my favourite; it is like the stem to a flower, you needed to climb up it and take luxury in the journey before kissing the lips as I am not just pressing my lips against her lips, she was allowing me to kiss her soul.

© 2012 Mantissa Closet

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems.

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Becca Bishop

Interesting. I'm not the romantic kind and, frankly, most things on this subject freak me out, but I was pulled into your writing almost right away. This is ridiculously wonderful :P Great job!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Captain Stargazer

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Posted 12 Years Ago

J. Write

Impressive writing Mantee. By far the most tantalizing style of writing I have seen in a while. Beautifully written to entice the soul and to feed the ears with excitement. Well done!!!