Love to Loathe

From May 8, 2016

Love is such a fragile emotion.

A heart made of glass,

One touch it falls to cracks.

You try to pick up the pieces,

But they pierce through your skin,

Scarring your brittle hands.

And our heart will never beat again.

At first, we loved to love.

Then, we loathed to love.

Now, we love to loathe.

Reviews

[Yaseen Hijazi]

Awesome! I like how you've continued from your previous poem "Loathe to Love". This sequel poem truly shows some of the pitfalls of love and also reflects strongly on the human condition. Well done! :)