Alone in Darkness

The Night falls with a silent sight,

Soulless are we. The light for

Which you pray flares once, then

Dies, swallowed by madness. All hope

Must die.


Your love is no more. How could you

Cause such hurt? Our dark emotions

Surround us, crying, we have lost

Our light.
 

Reviews

[D.L. Holmes]

somewhat philisophical.
nice write.

[Marie]

I liked it.

[Nana Carmine]

I really like it- it's simple but the point is strong and is clearly told in the lines. I think it's really good- great job