THE SOUL KNOWS

The soul knows 

how much it could

 hold,but the 

world forces on more load

Beauty emerges 

from the deepest

of pain,comes 

forth and lets down its powerful rains

Sorrow rares its

ugly head,but

love appears 

and takes her rightful place

Hope is left for

those who went 

astray,I have

 faith left for just one more day... 

Author's Note

thanx for reading :)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh how beautiful and witty this is..these are sadly the ways of life
i know ,its too much pain all along ,and we relish in it
actually i welcome it with open arms ,so i dont get surprised at life
dirty works..i am always prepared for you.so your pain wont come so true
the soul always knew how much it could take
i ve always knew beauty comes after the pains
like the sun shining after all that rain
sorrow and ugliness walk hand in hand
but love will show through and take its place
hope i ve looked for left and right
always came empty handed
and yes i have faith enough to keep me for one more day
lovely write..

[KidJunior]

i feel i can relate to this very much..

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"hope springs eternal" so one poet said...I guess as long as we have life there is always hope...as for faith...well, I think it's always available...we just don't always want to believe...good thought provoking write.

[Julie Beth]

this poem great amazing job :)

I think the first line would make a great title, however you'll need to take the 's' off of soul. ;)

I was wondering if the odd breaks were intentional due to some style choice? Sometimes they're appropriate, but how they are here is a bit distracting.