love game?

Why should i cry

when all I seek is a place to fit ma pride

how could you push me down

even when i was already underground?

Why do you

 cause me pain

just so you

could bring your name to fame?

Hey you! class

is in session

just answer me

this one question

Do we really need

all this aggression 

just so we could

strive off each others reaction?

YO! I'm tired of fight-in

tired of cry-in.

Tell me what did I do 

to deserve this from you?

Damn I int built for this sh*t

I'm ready to put all  pride aside

ready to admit

maybe it's time to quit....

Author's Note

tell me what you think ...enjoy :)

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

i love it and keeeeeeepppppppppppppppvit up and way to go and i love it love the poem ok so keep it up and way to go

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

I loved it wow i felt the emotion in this great work.. :) ^^

[Aven]

great tribute to EM, the king without a crown!

[Julie Beth]

i loved this just like everybody esle i could hear eminem sayin this great job

Well, Having the Em pic totally made me hear his voice saying the words. Which of course made it sound brilliant whether it was or not just because I like him lol.

[chillz]

haha lmao! momo ^ _ ^

[momo]

oh. now i know why its gangsta i just noticed the eminem and rihanna pictue lol

[momo]

i couldnt help but put a beat to it (youse gangsta!) anyways great emotion interesting writing style for it and well done!